> On Oct 21, 2021, at 11:53 , Chris Woodfield <ch...@semihuman.com> wrote:
> 
> I support this edit, for same reasons others have mentioned. 
> 
> If I’m recalling yesterday’s presentation correctly, it was ARIN Staff and 
> Legal, not the AC, that determined that this language could not be 
> implemented an editorial change, so that’s not up for debate here.
> 
> One possible adjustment that I’d like to suggest is that the term “IPv4 
> and/or ASN resources” seems a bit awkward, given how many times it appears in 
> the section. Perhaps we could add a new section that incorporates David’s 
> suggested language, but also handles the clarification of the definition of 
> number resources in a single place, scoped to Section 8.
> 
> So, a new Section 8.1.1, which I’d propose would be named “Definitions”, 
> could read as follows:
> 
> 
>       All references to “number resources" in this section, unless stated 
> otherwise, refer to IPv4 addresses and/or ASN resources. 
> 
>       When number resources of multiple types, including IPv6 resources, are 
> transferred, each resource type is considered separately and independently, 
> both for any conditions on their transferability and the application of any 
> restrictions following a transfer.
> 
> 
> Following this, the other edits to Section 8 in the proposal can simply be 
> changed to “number resources” to suit.

I think number resources should refer to IPv6, IPv4, ASNs, and any future 
Internet Number Resource that may come along.

I think where a specific subset of number resources is needed, spelling it out 
as is the current case is fine.

Owen

> 
> Opinions?
> 
> -C
> 
> 
>> On Oct 21, 2021, at 11:23 AM, Martin Hannigan <hanni...@gmail.com 
>> <mailto:hanni...@gmail.com>> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> I agree with Owen re: the editorial nature of the changes. However, I 
>> support it moving forward. I don't support the Farmer suggestion. That is 
>> possibly a material change that should undergo the rigors of "the process" 
>> on its own.
>> 
>> Warm regards,
>> 
>> -M<
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> On Thu, Oct 21, 2021 at 11:33 AM Owen DeLong via ARIN-PPML 
>> <arin-ppml@arin.net <mailto:arin-ppml@arin.net>> wrote:
>> I support this amendment.
>> 
>> Owen
>> 
>> 
>>> On Oct 20, 2021, at 12:45 , David Farmer via ARIN-PPML <arin-ppml@arin.net 
>>> <mailto:arin-ppml@arin.net>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> I support this proposal as currently written. 
>>> 
>>> However, regarding Kevin Blumberg's comment at the ARIN 48 discussion of 
>>> this policy earlier today; How about adding a paragraph like the following 
>>> to section 8.1, Principles;
>>> 
>>> When number resources of multiple types, IPv4, IPv6, and/or ASNs, are 
>>> transferred, each resource type is considered separately and independently, 
>>> both for any conditions on their transferability and the application of any 
>>> restrictions following a transfer.
>>> 
>>> Something like this added to Section 8.1, Principles, along with the 
>>> already proposed changes should eliminate any possibility of confusion in 
>>> this regard.
>>> 
>>> Thanks
>>> 
>>> On Tue, Aug 24, 2021 at 7:52 AM ARIN <i...@arin.net <mailto:i...@arin.net>> 
>>> wrote:
>>> On 19 August 2021, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) accepted "ARIN-prop-299: 
>>> Clarifications to Sections 8.3, 8.4 and 8.5.6" as a Draft Policy.
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Draft Policy ARIN-2021-4 is below and can be found at:
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2021_4/ 
>>> <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/2021_4/>
>>>  
>>> 
>>> You are encouraged to discuss all Draft Policies on PPML. The AC will 
>>> evaluate the discussion in order to assess the conformance of this draft 
>>> policy with ARIN's Principles of Internet number resource policy as stated 
>>> in the Policy Development Process (PDP). Specifically, these principles are:
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> * Enabling Fair and Impartial Number Resource Administration
>>> 
>>> * Technically Sound
>>> 
>>> * Supported by the Community
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> The PDP can be found at:
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ 
>>> <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/>
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Draft Policies and Proposals under discussion can be found at:
>>> 
>>> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ 
>>> <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/>
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Regards,
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Sean Hopkins
>>> 
>>> Senior Policy Analyst
>>> 
>>> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN)
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> 
>>>  
>>> Draft Policy ARIN-2021-4: Clarifications to Sections 8.3, 8.4 and 8.5.6 
>>> 
>>>  
>>> Problem Statement:
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> The current language in Sections 8.3 and 8.4 is not clear regarding 
>>> ASN-only transactions as well as the term “number resources”. The current 
>>> language in Section 8.5.7 is not clear with regard to additional IPv4 space.
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Policy statement:
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> In Section 8.3:
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Replace
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “In addition to transfers under section 8.2, IPv4 numbers resources and 
>>> ASNs may be transferred according to the following conditions.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> with
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “In addition to transfers under section 8.2, IPv4 address and/or ASN 
>>> resources may be transferred according to the following conditions.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Replace
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “The source entity must be the current registered holder of the IPv4 
>>> address resources, and not be involved in any dispute as to the status of 
>>> those resources.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> with
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “The source entity must be the current registered holder of the IPv4 
>>> address and/or ASN resources, and not be involved in any dispute as to the 
>>> status of those resources.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> In Section 8.4:
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Replace
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “Inter-regional transfers of IPv4 number resources and ASNs may take place 
>>> only via RIRs who agree to the transfer and share reciprocal, compatible 
>>> needs-based policies.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> with
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “Inter-regional transfers of IPv4 addresses and/or ASN resources may take 
>>> place only via RIRs who agree to the transfer and share reciprocal, 
>>> compatible needs-based policies.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Replace
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “The source entity must be the current rights holder of the IPv4 address 
>>> resources recognized by the RIR responsible for the resources, and not be 
>>> involved in any dispute as to the status of those resources.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> with
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “The source entity must be the current rights holder of the IPv4 address 
>>> and/or ASN resources recognized by the RIR responsible for the resources, 
>>> and not be involved in any dispute as to the status of those resources.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> In Section 8.5.6:
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Replace
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “Organizations with direct assignments or allocations from ARIN must have 
>>> efficiently utilized at least 50% of their cumulative IPv4 address blocks 
>>> in order to receive additional space. This includes all space reassigned to 
>>> their customers.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> with
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> “Organizations with direct assignments or allocations from ARIN must have 
>>> efficiently utilized at least 50% of their cumulative IPv4 address blocks 
>>> in order to receive additional IPv4 space. This includes all IPv4 space 
>>> reassigned to their customers.”
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Comments:
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> These changes were originally included in ARIN-edit-2021-1. Staff and Legal 
>>> review of ARIN-edit-2021-1 on June 14, 2021 indicated that some changes 
>>> were not editorial in nature. The editorial changes went forward in 
>>> ARIN-edit-2021-1 and the non-editorial changes are included here.
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
>>> Timetable for implementation: Immediate
>>> 
>>>  
>>> 
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