2009/11/20 Paul Webster <p...@dabdig.com>:
> On Fri, 20 Nov 2009 12:18:31 -0000, you wrote:
>
> <snip>
>
>>As an example, I think for this story:
>>http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/business/8369764.stm
>>
>>"Procter & Gamble recalls 120,000 Vicks nasal sprays"
>>
>>...is much clearer than...
>>
>>"Thousands of Vicks spray recalled"
>>
>>Especially if you don't know what Vicks is.
>
> How about
> P&G recall 120,000 Vicks sprays!!
> or
> Vicks nasal spray in health alert
> (that is how PA tell it)
> or
> Health worry with P&G Vicks Sinex
> or
> Nation saved by Vicks recall !!!!

Or from the Daily Express:

"Diana: Did she use the lethal nasal spray?"


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