Hi Vijay, Thanks for your review. See below.
On Tue, May 20, 2025 at 10:21 AM Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > > Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-bfd > Title: EVPN Network Layer Fault Management > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-bfd-10 > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: 2025-05-20 > IETF LC End Date: Not known > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This I-D is ready to be published as a standards document. > > Major issues: 0 > > Minor issues: 0 > > Nits: 3 > > Nits: > 1. Section 1: s/that is to say between/that is, between/ OK > 2. Section 3: "Continuity testing at each layer SHOULD, if possible,..." Here, > isn't the "if possible" redundant? After all, then normative strength is > SHOULD which loosely implies "if possible". OK > 3. Section 7: "...could affect the > packet load on the network..." Would it be possible to expand on how could the > document affect the packet load on the network? For instance, is the network > affected because the packet size becomes large, and therefore requires more > processing at the endpoints and intermediaries? Or is the network load > affected due the expected large number of EVIs once this standard is > implemented? Or are there other reasons inherent in the implementation of the > document that would increase the network load? Sure, we can add a few words saying that the increase in load is primarily due to the increase in the number of packets due to bfd packets. Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA d3e...@gmail.com _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list -- bess@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to bess-le...@ietf.org
