Barbara.Lundquist at sun.com wrote: > Karen, Ethan: Creating an Image pages 28-30 > 1 - Test the command examples for technical accuracy.
"Using Checkpointing to Create an Image" section - a nit - The first two sentences don't flow well together, maybe its because first has a double negative? Could we rewrite this to something like: "You don't have to use checkpointing to build and image, however you may prefer to pause and restart ..." The Note that follows - nit - again the first two sentences don't flow. Suggestion: "The checkpointing feature is enabled by default in the manifest file but requires a ZFS dataset, or a mount point that correlates to a ZFS dataset, to be specified as the build area." In the Example in the "Creating an Image Using Checkpoint Options" section. I don't see the file "slim_cd.xml" file as being delivered by DC anymore, but I do see a "slim_cd_x86.xml" Does this example need to be updated? thanks, -ethan
