Hi Drew and Dermot,

Mostly nits...

INSTALL_DISK_DISCOVERY_PANEL.txt
23,44 Note vs NOTE

disk_discovery_screen.py
42-54 alphabetize imports
60-85 might be nice to alphabetize these as well

gui_install_common.py
111 arguements
525 oppertunity

disk_selection.py
255 existance

discovery_selection.txt
3 suggested reword:
 what kind of disks should be found and presented for selection
->
 what kind of disks should be presented for selection

iscsi.txt
9,12 Note vs. NOTE
36 Would be good to show expanded CHAP acronym ala 
INSTALL_DISK_DISCOVERY_PANEL.txt:83

iscsi.py
35-46 alphabetize imports
59-75, 78-86 alphabetize these groupings as well?

physical.py
3312 Would it be more clear to say "%s is not online and requires manual servicing" or maybe tell the user what the current state is?
3317 resovled
3318,3328, 3332 For these multiple argument strings. should you be using %(key)s style (see 7154017, 7158566). 3427-3436 Is there any possibility that you could get an OS Device Name line before a LUN line? If so, lun_num won't exist yet at 3431.
3573 seperated
3580 paramaters

Sue

On 04/ 4/12 09:52 AM, Drew Fisher wrote:
Good morning!

Dermot and I would like to get a second-round code review for the iSCSI project.

https://cr.opensolaris.org/action/browse/caiman/drewfish/iSCSI2/

Due to the large amount of time between code review cycles and the large amount 
of code pushed for
the UEFI project, an incremental webrev is difficult to cobble together. If 
people really need one
we can try to get one created but since the majority of the first-round 
comments were nits or small
requests (except for Jesse's ...), I'm not sure how much value there would be 
for an incremental.

Jesse's request (for those not interested in scrolling back in the email 
history) was to make the
Target LUN optional. If the LUN is specified, only show the one LUN. If the LUN 
was omitted show all
of the LUNs on the Target.

These bits are current in a second round of QE testing but I'm not expecting 
any large issues to
come out of the test cycle.

I'd like to get the review by Wednesday, April 11th. I'd like to ask the same 
people to look again
at specific sections:

Karen: Could I get you to look specifically at the text-installer changes?
Niall/John: Could I get you both to look specifically at the GUI changes?
Jesse: Can you look at code in $SRC/lib/install_target as that's where all the 
calls to iscsiadm and
libima.so exist

If anybody needs screenshots or ISOs, let me know.

Thanks!

-Drew and Dermot

On 2/15/12 10:30 AM, Drew Fisher wrote:
Good morning!

Dermot and I would like to get a first-round code review for the following 
PSARC/CRs:

PSARC/2012/023  
<http://psarc.us.oracle.com/Archives/CaseLog/arc/PSARC/2012/023>  Interactive 
Installation to iSCSI
6974246  <http://monaco.us.oracle.com/detail.jsf?cr=6974246>  Automated Install 
should provide mechanism for setting iSCSI initiator-id-node
7004719  <http://monaco.us.oracle.com/detail.jsf?cr=7004719>  Opensolaris 
LiveCD installation should give a GUI for installing Solaris onto iSCSI LUN
7004720  <http://monaco.us.oracle.com/detail.jsf?cr=7004720>  Opensolaris text 
installer should give a screen for installing solaris onto iscsi lun
7114789  <http://monaco.us.oracle.com/detail.jsf?cr=7114789>  unlabelled iSCSI 
drives and setting an iSCSI boot-device require special handling on SPARC
7121245  <http://monaco.us.oracle.com/detail.jsf?cr=7121245>  iscsi paths don't 
translate to bootable OBP paths/strings
7132111  <http://monaco.us.oracle.com/detail.jsf?cr=7132111>  sample ai 
manifest file does not mention setting whole_disk in disk target section
7132457  <http://monaco.us.oracle.com/detail.jsf?cr=7132457>  Race condition in 
AI involving the target discovery and the check for the new OS Device Name
7145512  <http://monaco.us.oracle.com/detail.jsf?cr=7145512>  pulling iSCSI 
information from the DHCP server does not support iSCSI boot

https://cr.opensolaris.org/action/browse/caiman/drewfish/iSCSI/

Karen: Could I get you to look specifically at the text-installer changes?
Niall/John: Could I get you both to look specifically at the GUI changes?
Jesse: Can you look at code in $SRC/lib/install_target as that's where all the 
calls to iscsiadm
and libima.so exist

Outstanding issues:

- QE has not yet started a test cycle. I've been working with Angela Li on 
this. I'm hoping to
start a test cycle soon
- ai_manifest.4 is still being edited. I've emailed proposed changes to Alta 
who will translate
them into actual English
- The fix for 7132457 is slated to be tested by PIT soon for confirmation.

ISO / USB access can be found at Hudson: 
http://indiana-build.us.oracle.com/view/iSCSI/ Choose the
job for the installer you want to look at and you'll see links along the job's 
page pointing to
the latest ISO / USB image

Screenshots of the GUI and Text-Installer (for those not interested in firing 
up an entire ISO)
can be found here:
http://mox.us.oracle.com/code/screenshots/gui/
http://mox.us.oracle.com/code/screenshots/ti/

If people want to try out the ISOs, let me know and I can provide target IP/LUN 
information to use.

Thanks!

-Drew and Dermot


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