Hi Jeremias, > ...PDF: http://people.apache.org/~jeremias/asf/asf-brochure-en-up.pdf...
Great stuff! Sorry to answer late, I finally found some time to have a closer look, here are some suggestions. It says nothing about the board, maybe just "9 volunteer directors" in "numbers" would do. In "projects", it might be good to mention incubating ones, suggest "plus a number of incubating projects (incubator.apache.org)". AFAIK ApacheCon Amsterdam 2009 is planned for March 23-27. Maybe the picture at http://www.flickr.com/photos/twleung/2011802787/in/set-72157603145226237/ would look better? IIUC it's "all rights reserved" so I guess Ted Leung would have to authorize its use. I find the sponsorship part a bit too detailed compared to the rest, here's an alternate suggestion: ** The ASF Sponsorship Program is the official avenue for substantial, non-directed monetary contributions to the ASF. It is the closest and most direct method for a corporation or individual to support the ASF. In return, ASF will make official acknowledgement and thanks for the donation via public relations involvement (as appropriate according to one of four sponsorship levels), sponsor logos, etc. More details can be found at www.apache.org/foundation, or by contacting [EMAIL PROTECTED] ** Thanks for your work! Once you're done, I'd suggest informing [EMAIL PROTECTED] of this flyer, so that others can reuse it as needed. -Bertrand --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
