On 18.09.2008 17:42:24 Bertrand Delacretaz wrote: > Hi Jeremias, > > > ...PDF: http://people.apache.org/~jeremias/asf/asf-brochure-en-up.pdf... > > Great stuff! Sorry to answer late, I finally found some time to have a > closer look, here are some suggestions. > > It says nothing about the board, maybe just "9 volunteer directors" in > "numbers" would do.
Hehe. Added now. > In "projects", it might be good to mention incubating ones, suggest > "plus a number of incubating projects (incubator.apache.org)". Good idea. There was still some space available at the bottom. > AFAIK ApacheCon Amsterdam 2009 is planned for March 23-27. Thanks, Lars already gave me that date. > Maybe the picture at > http://www.flickr.com/photos/twleung/2011802787/in/set-72157603145226237/ > would look better? IIUC it's "all rights reserved" so I guess Ted > Leung would have to authorize its use. Actually, I prefer the picture I chose because IMO it better reflects what happens at ApacheCon (Discussions, Notebooks, Hacking...). The people picture doesn't have so much to do with ApacheCon. Plus to most people reading this brochure, the people on the picture will be strangers. > I find the sponsorship part a bit too detailed compared to the rest, > here's an alternate suggestion: > > ** > The ASF Sponsorship Program is the official avenue for substantial, > non-directed monetary contributions to the ASF. It is the closest and > most direct method for a corporation or individual to support the ASF. > In return, ASF will make official acknowledgement and thanks for the > donation via public relations involvement (as appropriate according to > one of four sponsorship levels), sponsor logos, etc. > > More details can be found at www.apache.org/foundation, or by > contacting [EMAIL PROTECTED] > ** You're right. Let's try it this way. I've trimmed the German version a bit, too. > Thanks for your work! > > Once you're done, I'd suggest informing [EMAIL PROTECTED] of this flyer, > so that others can reuse it as needed. Already done earlier today. Thanks, Bertrand. See you next week. BTW, I've uploaded new versions. Jeremias Maerki --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
