At that pace, feel free to take the section that Ulrich gave me, too. :) On Tue, Mar 5, 2013 at 12:34 PM, Mark Garrow <[email protected]> wrote: > I have completed chapters 4,5,6 and part of 7. Please review. If you have > any issues or questions about any of the proposed changes let me know :) > The file is available here... > https://docs.google.com/folder/d/0Bx4LKjIszYzdX1BtLWZDaTltVlU/edit?usp=sharing > > > On Tue, Mar 5, 2013 at 10:22 AM, Colin Adams <[email protected]> > wrote: >> >> On 5 March 2013 18:12, Mark Garrow <[email protected]> wrote: >> > "Set' and 'Sets' appear to be used interchangeably as first words in a >> > number of paragraph/statements ..... as in 'Set the density of >> > the >> > filter ......'. I read these instances of usage as instructions and >> > not as >> > command statements." >> > >> > As a native speaker this is how I see it.. Look to page 16 for the >> > location >> > of the content. The original "0-5 set the rating of the image" >> > Example >> > 1> 0-5 set the ratings of an image 2> 0-5 sets the rating of an >> > image. >> > The original is a command not a description. Example 1 is close but >> > isn't >> > correct because ratings being plural implies you can assign more than a >> > set >> > number of stars. However using the word "an" before "image" is correct. >> > To >> > me the correct option is example 2. Think of the entire line like a >> > scentence, zero through five sets the rating of an image, "sets" >> > becomes a >> > verb/action. >> > >> > I have another area of verbal conflict on the same page and table, and >> > seen >> > throughout the document.. the use of "hit" instead of enter or press >> > (contextually dependent). Using colloquial English "hit" would be >> > acceptable. But if the English manual was used by a non-native speaker >> > who >> > didn't have access to their language or was making comparisons, it >> > wouldn't >> > translate well. I also doubt it would make sense outside of the U.S., >> > say >> > Australia, England. >> >> As an Englishman, I understand it, as a well-known Americanism. >> "Press" sounds so much less violent. > > > > > -- > > > Best regards, > > Mark Garrow > CalState Realty / C2 Financial Corp. > [email protected] > 760-300-3639 Direct > www.MarkGarrowRealtor.com > DRE 01276379 > > E-mails sent or received shall neither constitute acceptance of conducting > transactions via electronic means nor create a binding contract until and > unless a written contract is signed by the parties.
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