On 2018-02-09, rhkra...@gmail.com <rhkra...@gmail.com> wrote: > On Friday, February 09, 2018 08:58:24 AM Curt wrote: >> There once was a hacker from Bali >> Who did her forensics on Kali >> One fine day to be rude >> She modeled in the nude >> Got fingered by Tom and Dick and Sally. > > I'm not a poet, and forget any rules that I may once have supposed to learn, > but I think this sounds just slightly better (minor wordsmithing): > > > There once was a hacker from Bali > Who did her forensics on Kali > One day to be rude > She posed in the nude > Got fingered by Tom, Dick, and Sally. > Right. I miscounted the last line (a syllable too many).
I was going for 9-9-6-6-9 (which I thought was the traditional thingamajig). Of course with "posed" instead of "modeled" you're losing word play (digital forensic models as well as...you get it, I'm sure). -- “True terror is to wake up one morning and discover that your high school class is running the country.” – Kurt Vonnegut