On Friday, February 09, 2018 02:15:51 PM Curt wrote:
> On 2018-02-09, rhkra...@gmail.com <rhkra...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > On Friday, February 09, 2018 08:58:24 AM Curt wrote:

<I  messed up the quoting, trying to give Curt the credit for the original 
poem>

> > There once was a hacker from Bali
> > Who did her forensics on Kali
> > One day to be rude
> > She posed in the nude
> > Got fingered by Tom, Dick, and Sally.
> 
> Right. I miscounted the last line (a syllable too many).
> 
> I was going for 9-9-6-6-9 (which I thought was the traditional
> thingamajig).
> 
> Of course with "posed" instead of "modeled" you're losing word play
> (digital forensic models as well as...you get it, I'm sure).

Well, I missed that originally.

Modeled is almost 3 syllables, but I want to count posed as 1 syllable (so I 
am inconsistent).  ;-)

If it should be 9-9-6-6-9 I guess it needs more tweaking.  It works for me as 
is ;-)


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