drewjensen wrote: > > > That is one approach..anyone else have a thought on that? > > Thanks > > Drew > That is really outstanding work. I went to the webpage showing all previous versions and it is impressive how the design just kept getting better with each iteration.
I can only think of a few terribly minor nitpicks... (1) In "Calculate, analyze and visually communicate" there is an extra space before the word "visually" that should be removed. (2) "Create simple diagrams to dynamic 3-D illustrations...": alternatively, perhaps, "Create simple diagrams, dynamic 3-D illustrations..." (3) "Base provides the integrated database access" might want to drop "the" (4) "Create easy to difficult mathematical formulas with this great tool and then you can paste it into your documents." alternatively, perhaps, "Create simple or complex mathematical formulas with this versatile tool and paste them into your documents." But really, these are just nitpicks. There is such a thing as "gilding the lily" and in my opinion this DVD cover is very handsome and smart looking already. -- View this message in context: http://nabble.documentfoundation.org/Re-us-marketing-North-American-Community-DVD-cover-art-updated-tp2799769p2828174.html Sent from the Design mailing list archive at Nabble.com. -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to design+h...@libreoffice.org Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
