On 21/01/2015 17:15, Charles-H. Schulz wrote:
I had to finagle with the actual page structure, so the result is a
bit different from what you came up with, but the content is the same.
Here it is:
http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/feedback/
Many thanks Charles. Putting the new block on the RHS looks good.
I can live with the changes as they are, but my gut feeling is that you
have rather weakened the welcome I thought was really important.
If you are open to further input, could I suggest the following:
- make the page into two distinct columns, with Feedback on the left and
Welcome on the right.
- remove the Have a Question? Found a Bug? heading, which seems a bit
redundant.
- the ? Ask a question heading and the rest of the LH column would thus
be directly below the Feedback heading
- as a heading for the RH column, reinstate 'Welcome to the LibreOffice
Community' as the heading, which was my key message
- the "LibreOffice community includes..." text below that, all in the RH
column
- block 'Users also have responsibilities!' as it stands below that
- it seems to me that even without the changes suggested above, the next
heading 'LibreOffice is a community...' conflicts with the statement
above 'The LibreOffice community includes all users...' so I would like
to suggest a modification from both sources to make this heading 'Want
to be more involved? Join us!'
- below that, the text is all fine
If you want me to whiteboard the above, I will, but the suggestions may
be sufficiently clear without the need for that. As stated above, I
could live with the page as it is, but reluctantly because it is
definitely not as welcoming as the initial suggestion, and IMHO it will
make a difference to how welcome users feel and in a small but
worthwhile way the extra changes would encourage more active involvement.
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Mike Hall
www.onepoyle.net
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