Just like to say that Jan's are also my nitpicks :)

After all, distinguishable links, neutral background color, and emphasis
with italics instead of bold are basically good style guidelines.

In addition, I'd just go without the lamp...

- Klaus


On Sat, 2010-07-10 at 11:26 +0200, Jan Lehnardt wrote:
> Hey,
> 
> I like what I see. There's a few details, that I'd like to see improved 
> (yay bikeshedding), but the general direction is pretty good :)
> 
> My (personal, highly subjective) nitpics:
> 
>  - The start page illustration is too big. On a 13" MacBook, The "Relax"
>  is already cut off. I'd look at resizing things so everything can move
>  50–100px (probably closer to 100px) up.
> 
>  - Links should have a contrast colour (red? :) to be distinguishable
>     form regular text.
> 
>  - Emphasis should be done with italics, not bold.
> 
>  - I reallyreallyreally don't like the background colour :) — I'd go with
>    a plain white background and have the lamp make a bright-yellow
>    light field. Alternatively, a bright grey, potentially textured, so the
>    lamp light could be full white. — Or we just get rid of the lamp :)
> 
> Again, I generally like the direction and I think we can make something
> great out of it! :)
> 
> Cheers
> Jan


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