On Sun, 2006-04-30 at 12:35 +0200, Cor Nouws wrote: > Hi John, > > John McCreesh wrote: > > On Sat, 2006-04-29 at 00:02 +0200, Cor Nouws wrote: > >>One warning: when talking about this with some business-people (month or > >>so ago), it turned out that they could become offended. As if I > >>suggested that they would do illegal business ... > > > > > > Good point - I've added "Microsoft's licence agreements are complicated > > - it's easy to break them by mistake" > > Smart ;-) > > I just took a little time to read the (renewed) draft page. > Would it be an idea to put the added sentence two lines lower, after "If > you have a copy of ..."?
I've moved things about a bit on the latest version > Furthermore, I would suggest think about changing the pay-off > "Get legal - get OpenOffice.org today!" > into something like > "No doubts about a legal Office - get OpenOffice.org today!" > (or "No fear about your Office being illegal", or ....) > Just to make it sound less accusing. The slogan for the campaign is "Get Legal - Get OpenOffice.org" so I'd like with it. It is designed to be arresting (sorry, another bad English play on words - arresting = "eye-catching" as well as "being taken away by the police") John --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
