Juergen Schmidt wrote (8-1-2009 11:54)

i have uploaded a further draft from Jacek (i think it should be "future is free")

It's getting better.
Few remarks:
 - don't understand "future it free"
 - propose "80+ languages" (double + will often not be understand)
 - am not really happy with the wording, but find it difficult to
   give better now. I think I miss the cool and quality aspects
   more or less.
 - font openoffice.org at the bottom not looking fine. (as metioned
   by others).

And two further drafts for keychains.

I prefer 1a.

Regards,
Cor

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