On 1/26/18, 11:43 AM, "Andrew Wetmore" <cottag...@gmail.com> wrote:
>I don't think we need to build out the full ToC up front, rather than PAYG >haha. There are tons of pages that I have not yet listed in the Google >doc, >and several decisions we have to make. > >For example, we have an Express set of controls and MDL and who knows what >else. I presume we need to explain how these various sets of controls >relate to each other... Yes, and it also occurred to me that we need to discuss targets (SWF output and/or JS output) and how to manage that. And keep in mind that someday there may be a third or fourth output. My 2 cents, -Alex > >On Fri, Jan 26, 2018 at 1:09 PM, Alex Harui <aha...@adobe.com.invalid> >wrote: > >> Hi Andrew, >> >> Responses in-line. >> >> On 1/26/18, 2:48 AM, "Andrew Wetmore" <cottag...@gmail.com> wrote: >> >> >Good morning. >> > >> >Least thing first: Does the Apache header absolutely need to be in >>short >> >lines with hard line breaks so it takes up so much vertical space in >>the >> >file? Please look at test-apache-header.md and see whether the header >> laid >> >out on fewer lines and trusting to line wrapping works. >> >> I don't know for sure. There is a header scanning tool that we use and >>I >> just tried it and it didn't mind your reformatting, so that's good >>enough >> for me. >> > >> >I am fine with your suggestions about where "Hello, World" should be >>and >> >how "Developing an application" might play out. However, this does >>raise >> >the question of whether this sort of help-docs structure is going to >>have >> >an index or other means to locate concepts like "data binding" if it is >> >tucked down in a larger set of instructions about applications rather >>than >> >being a entry itself. >> >> IMO, the 10-minute tutorial won't go into any serious detail about data >> binding, so "data binding" would have its own section wherever it makes >> sense and a link to it from the tutorial. >> > >> >I think the doc structure is still highly fluid and that we need to >>either >> >hold off on the ToC until we are closer to alpha-release of the >> >documentation, or have a less-bulky ToC document. My rough estimate is >> >that >> >we have stubs for less than 10% of the pages we will eventually have. >> >> IMO, the toc.json is relatively compact and much easier to change. I'm >> not sure how to make it any smaller. I could probably sit down and >>crank >> out all of the missing stubs in an evening, but is it worth it? I like >> the fact that entries don't show up until we create a page for them. >> >> My 2 cents, >> -Alex >> > >> >On Fri, Jan 26, 2018 at 4:40 AM, Alex Harui <aha...@adobe.com.invalid> >> >wrote: >> > >> >> Hi Andrew, >> >> >> >> I took a quick peek at the Adobe doc. I'm not sure "Development >>Phases" >> >> should be the first thing under "Create an application", especially >> >>given >> >> how the Adobe doc says that some of those sub-topics are not phases. >> >> Also, I think there is more than one way to develop an application. >> >> >> >> My temptation is to leave "Hello, World" as the end of the "Get >>Started" >> >> section. Getting "Hello World" to work will prove that you have >> >>properly >> >> installed the SDK. Then, I would like to suggest tweaking the >>"Create >> >>An >> >> Application" section to be where we build an app in 10 minutes. I >>think >> >> we should start with "Application Structure" I will discuss the MVC >> >> pattern there as an option. Then the next section would be called >> >> something like "A (10 Minute) Tutorial" and the sub-topics will be >>major >> >> steps towards building an example app. It will take you through >> >>building >> >> the UI, network access, maybe data-binding, and it will address >> >>building, >> >> debugging, and deploying the example. It will pick up enough of the >> >> development phase information that I don't think we'll need a >>separate >> >> section for it. >> >> >> >> I'm shutting down for tonight so I'll see what your thoughts are >>when I >> >> get going again. I could also draft my version in a branch if you >>don't >> >> want to mess with the develop branch right now. >> >> >> >> Thoughts? >> >> -Alex >> >> >> >> >> >-- >> >Andrew Wetmore >> > >> >>>https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fcottage1 >>>4 >> . >> >blogspot.com%2F&data=02%7C01%7Caharui%40adobe.com% >> 7Cfc7c34f4df27449408cf08 >> >d564aa6bd1%7Cfa7b1b5a7b34438794aed2c178decee1%7C0%7C0% >> 7C636525605481253150 >> >&sdata=gbSwjy2OMLy72u6Jna41ySDuPFO0K5tsjEV7ZZLnEo4%3D&reserved=0 >> >> > > >-- >Andrew Wetmore > >https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fcottage14. >blogspot.com%2F&data=02%7C01%7Caharui%40adobe.com%7Ccd4e8ea7ad2844405a7908 >d564f50ec9%7Cfa7b1b5a7b34438794aed2c178decee1%7C0%7C0%7C636525926034660177 >&sdata=QZrNY2%2BwdrY%2FZ48rnKTpAN79N9g7q%2Bn%2BvmQPsHvrrSc%3D&reserved=0