On Tue, Nov 17, 2015 at 1:01 AM, Dan Roberts <[email protected]> wrote:
> > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EohzxhrgM1Ky4CaKpk72WiUNepFeT5krdReEKxDyL8o/edit?usp=sharing > > I've annotated lots of things I don't like with comments, I'm sure people > will find many more things they hate. That's fine, be brutal. It's probably > also too long... > A great start, but definitely way too long, and quite repetitive (we tell them we need funds about 6 times!). We should remove any sentence that is repetitive or otherwise redundant. Ian. -- Ian Clarke Founder, The Freenet Project Email: [email protected] _______________________________________________ Devl mailing list [email protected] https://emu.freenetproject.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/devl
