Sheng, Thanks much for your confirmation.
Cheers, Yuanlong > -----Original Message----- > From: Sheng Jiang > Sent: Tuesday, December 15, 2015 9:57 AM > To: Jiangyuanlong; Russ Housley; Stephen Farrell; Jari Arkko; Ben Campbell; > Barry > Leiba; Alvaro Retana (aretana); Stewart Bryant > Cc: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree....@ietf.org; IETF Gen-ART; The IESG; > BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A > Subject: RE: Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 > > Hi, I can confirm this version addresses my OPS DIR review comments. > > Thanks, > > Sheng > > >-----Original Message----- > >From: Jiangyuanlong > >Sent: Friday, December 11, 2015 7:17 PM > >To: Russ Housley; Stephen Farrell; Jari Arkko; Sheng Jiang; Ben Campbell; > >Barry > >Leiba; Alvaro Retana (aretana); Stewart Bryant > >Cc: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree....@ietf.org; IETF Gen-ART; The IESG; > >BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A > >Subject: Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 > > > >Hi all, > > > >Thanks a lot for your reviews. > >Based on all the comments received during the IESG evaluation, we have > >prepared a tentative version 11 for this draft. > >We believe all the comments are resolved, but please check whether you have > >any concerns with the texts in this version. > > > >If there are no further comments, we will upload it as the formal revision 11 > >version. > > > >Best regards, > >Yuanlong > > > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A [mailto:db3...@att.com] > >> Sent: Thursday, December 03, 2015 11:03 PM > >> To: Jari Arkko > >> Cc: Jiangyuanlong; Russ Housley; > >> draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree....@ietf.org; > >IETF > >> Gen-ART; IETF > >> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 > >> > >> Hi Jari, > >> > >> Yes, we'll be doing a new revision for addressing other comments. > >> > >> I've asked for today's telechat if no discusses to mark it as approved, > >> revised > >> draft needed. > >> > >> Much thanks Russ for your review! > >> > >> Deborah > >> > >> > >> Sent from my iPhone > >> > >> > On Dec 3, 2015, at 1:08 PM, Jari Arkko <jari.ar...@piuha.net> wrote: > >> > > >> > Many thanks for your detailed review, Russ! > >> > > >> > Yuanlong, will there be a new draft version or other edits before the > >> > draft > >> > is approved? > >> > > >> > Jari > >> > > >> >> On 17 Nov 2015, at 00:53, Jiangyuanlong <jiangyuanl...@huawei.com> > >> wrote: > >> >> > >> >> Russ, > >> >> > >> >> Thanks a lot for your review and good observations. > >> >> Please see my comments in line. > >> >> > >> >> Best regards, > >> >> Yuanlong > >> >> > >> >>> -----Original Message----- > >> >>> From: Russ Housley [mailto:hous...@vigilsec.com] > >> >>> Sent: Saturday, November 14, 2015 1:28 AM > >> >>> To: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree....@ietf.org > >> >>> Cc: IETF Gen-ART; IETF > >> >>> Subject: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 > >> >>> > >> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > >Review > >> >>> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the > >IESG for > >> >>> the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > >or AD > >> >>> before posting a new version of the draft. > >> >>> > >> >>> For more information, please see the FAQ at > >> >>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > >> >>> > >> >>> Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10 > >> >>> Reviewer: Russ Housley > >> >>> Review Date: 2015-11-13 > >> >>> IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-24 > >> >>> IESG Telechat date: unknown > >> >>> > >> >>> Summary: Almost Ready > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> Major Concerns: None > >> >>> > >> >>> > >> >>> Minor Concerns: > >> >>> > >> >>> Sections 4.1 and 5.3.1 inclues a reference to [802.1Q-2011]. Should > >this be > >> >>> the 2014 version of the document? If not, please add the informative > >> >>> reference for [802.1Q-2011]. > >> >> [YJ] Yes, all these should refer to [802.1Q-2014]. > >> >> > >> >>> > >> >>> Other Editorial Comments: > >> >>> > >> >>> The Abstract should appear on the title page. > >> >> [YJ] OK. > >> >> > >> >>> Section 3 needs a reference for MEF 6.1: > >> >>> s/Specification MEF 6.1/Specification MEF 6.1 [MEF6.1]/ Also, [MEF6.1] > >> >>> needs to be added as a normative reference. > >> >> [YJ] All these will be updated to MEF 6.2. > >> >> > >> >>> Section 3 needs a reference for IEEE 802.1Q-2003: > >> >>> s/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003 [802.1Q-2003]/ > >Also, > >> >>> please add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003]. > >> >> [YJ] Yes, we will add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003]. > >> >> > >> >>> Third level section headings do not have space between the section > >number > >> >>> and the section title. For example: > >> >>> s/5.3.1.PW Processing/5.3.1. PW Processing/ > >> >> [YJ] OK. > >> >> > >> >>> In Fig 4, there is room to shift the figure to the right, this will > >> >>> allow the > >"AC" > >> >>> labels to fit better on the left: > >> >>> > >> >>> +----------------------------------------+ > >> >>> | VPLS-capable PE model | > >> >>> | +---------------+ +------+ | > >> >>> | | |==========|TVSI-1|------------ > >> >>> +---+ AC | | ------------ |------------ PWs > >> >>> |CE |----------| Bridge ------------ |------------ > >> >>> +---+ | | | Root & +------+ | > >> >>> | | Module | Leaf VLAN o | > >> >>> | | | o | > >> >>> | | | o | > >> >>> | | | o | > >> >>> | | | o | > >> >>> +---+ AC | | | VLAN-n +------+ | > >> >>> |CE |----------| ------------VSI-n |------------- > >> >>> +---+ | | |==========| > >|------------- PWs > >> >>> | | | ^ | > >|------------- > >> >>> | +---------------+ | +------+ | > >> >>> | | | > >> >>> +-------------------------|--------------+ > >> >>> LAN emulation Interface > >> >>> > >> >>> Figure 4 A VPLS PE Model for E-Tree with a Single T-VSI > >> >> > >> >> > >> >> [YJ] OK. > >> >> > >> >> _______________________________________________ > >> >> Gen-art mailing list > >> >> Gen-art@ietf.org > >> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > >> > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
