Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2017-10-16 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-23 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as an Informational RFC Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this document " section 2. The document is missing a table of content 3. In the acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole text heavily from a previous document doing similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also stole? I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a similar document by Russ Housely" _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
