On 16/10/17 08:13, Roni Even wrote: <snip>
Nits/editorial comments:1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this document " section 2. The document is missing a table of content 3. In the acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole text heavily from a previous document doing similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also stole? I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a similar document by Russ Housely"
s/Housely/Housley/ -- Rob Stradling Senior Research & Development Scientist COMODO - Creating Trust Online _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
