> -----Original Message----- > From: Roni Even [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Monday, October 16, 2017 12:13 AM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; draft-schaad-curdle-oid- > [email protected] > Subject: Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02 > > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-?? > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date: 2017-10-16 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-23 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as an Informational > RFC > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to this > document " section 2. The document is missing a table of content 3. In the > acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole text heavily > from a previous document doing > similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also > stole? I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a > similar document by Russ Housely"
1. There is an XML comment in the document source asking that it be removed. 2. Due to the shortness of the document, a TOC is not required. 3. Done. Jim _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
