OK Roni > -----Original Message----- > From: Gen-art [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Jim Schaad > Sent: יום ב 16 אוקטובר 2017 16:30 > To: 'Roni Even'; [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; draft-schaad-curdle-oid- > [email protected] > Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid- > registry-02 > > The style guide changed - a TOC is now required - so added it. > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Roni Even [mailto:[email protected]] > > Sent: Monday, October 16, 2017 12:13 AM > > To: [email protected] > > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; draft-schaad-curdle-oid- > > [email protected] > > Subject: Genart last call review of > > draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02 > > > > Reviewer: Roni Even > > Review result: Ready with Nits > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by > > the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like > > any other last call comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Document: draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-?? > > Reviewer: Roni Even > > Review Date: 2017-10-16 > > IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-23 > > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > > > Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as an > > Informational RFC > > > > Major issues: > > > > Minor issues: > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > 1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to > > this document " section 2. The document is missing a table of content > > 3. In the acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole > > text heavily from a previous document doing > > similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also > > stole? I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a > > similar document by Russ Housely" > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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