OOps - thought this went out three days ago.  Apologies if this duplicative.

List and ccs:

        1.  Thanks to David for this lead on Prof. Stavins letter  (found at 
http://www.robertstavinsblog.org/2014/04/25/is-the-ipcc-government-approval-process-broken-2/)
        
        2.  Since this provides some (not all by any means) of the detail we 
have been wondering about as the SPM changed character,  I read the Stavins 
letter with interest.  But it is hard to go back and forth between the versions 
A and B of April 7 and 12 when they are in different documents.  So I have 
combined them as follows (no way to shorten this exercise).  I have underlined 
what seems to be new in the final version and underlined what was retained in 
April 7 draft.  The numbering of paragraphs is not in the originals, nor the 
short summary titles I gave.  The only major style IPCC change is that the 
final contains no bolding.  There was some shuffling and deletion of paragraphs

        3.  I have added some comments from a biochar perspective and hope 
others will do similarly


#1  On UNFCC
The United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change (UNFCCC) is the main 
multilateral 
forum focused on addressing climate change, with nearly universal 
participation. Other institutions 
organized at different levels of governance have resulted in diversifying 
international climate change 
cooperation. [13.3.1, 13.4.1.4, 13.5]  
Replaced
International cooperation on climate change has diversified over the past 
decade. The United 
Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change (UNFCCC) remains a primary 
international forum 
for climate negotiations, and is seen by many as the most legitimate 
international climate policy 
venue due in part to its virtually universal membership [13.3.1, 13.4.1.4, 
13.5]. However, other 
institutions organized at many different scales have ………
risen in importance due to the inclusion of 
climate change issues in other policy arenas and growing awareness of the 
co‐benefits that can arise 
from linking climate mitigation and other issues [13.3, 13.4, 13.5]. 
        [RWL comment #1 - Sorry to see the word “co-benefit” disappear.   
Objection maybe to the words “risen in importance”??

 #2  On cooperation agreements
Existing and proposed international climate change cooperation arrangements 
vary in their focus and 
degree of centralization and coordination. They span: multilateral agreements, 
harmonized national 
policies and decentralized but coordinated national policies, as well as 
regional and regionally‐
coordinated policies. [Figure TS.37, 13.4, 13.13.2, 14.4] 
Replaced
Existing and proposed international climate agreements and instruments vary in 
their focus and 
degree of centralization. International climate agreements and instruments 
span: multilateral 
agreements (such as the Kyoto Protocol targets and accounting rules), 
harmonized national policies, 
and decentralized but coordinated national policies (such as planned linkages 
of national and sub‐
national emissions trading schemes) Also, .regional and regionally coordinated 
policies exist and 
have been proposed. [Figure 13.2, 13.4, 13.13.2, 14.4] 
        RWL comment:   Doesn’t seem to be a big change, especially from biochar 
angles.

#3   On Kyoto
The Kyoto Protocol offers lessons towards achieving the ultimate objective of 
the UNFCCC, 
particularly with respect to participation, implementation, flexibility 
mechanisms, and environmental 
effectiveness. (medium evidence, low agreement). [5.2, 13.7.2, 13.13.1.1, 
13.13.1.2, 14.3.7.1, Table 
TS.9] 
Replaced 
The Kyoto Protocol was the first binding step toward implementing the 
principles and goals 
provided by the UNFCCC, but it has had limited effects on global emissions 
because some 
countries did not ratify the Protocol, some Parties did not meet their 
commitments, and its 
commitments applied to only a portion of the global economy (medium evidence, 
low agreement). 
The Parties collectively surpassed their collective emission reduction target 
in the first commitment 
period, but the Protocol credited emissions reductions that would have occurred 
even in its absence. 
The Kyoto Protocol does not directly influence the emissions of non‐Annex I 
countries, which have 
grown rapidly over the past decade. [5.2, 13.13.1.1] The Kyoto Protocol’s Clean 
Development 
Mechanism (CDM), which created a market for emissions offsets from developing 
countries, had 
generated credits equivalent to over 1.3 GtCO2eq by July 2013. Its 
environmental effectiveness has 
been mixed due to concerns about the additionality of projects, the validity of 
baselines, the 
possibility of emissions leakage, and recent credit price decreases (medium 
evidence; medium 
agreement). CDM projects were concentrated in a limited number of countries. 
[13.7.2, 13.13.1.2, 
14.3.7.1] 
RWL comment:  Missing details on Kyoto now, but I am not sure how or if this 
impacts biochar.



#4 ON UNFCCC
UNFCCC activities since 2007 have led to an increasing number of institutions 
and other arrangements 
for international climate change cooperation. [13.5.1.1, 13.13.1.3, 16.2.1.1] 
& new 
#5  ON Regions
Policy linkages among regional, national, and sub‐national climate policies 
offer potential climate 
mitigation and adaptation benefits (medium evidence, medium agreement). 
Linkages can be 
established between national policies, various instruments, and through 
regional cooperation [13.3.1, 
13.5.1.3, 13.5.3, 14.5]. 
Replaced
Recent UNFCCC negotiations have sought to include more ambitious contributions 
from the 
countries with commitments under the Kyoto Protocol, mitigation contributions 
from a broader 
set of countries, and new finance and technology mechanisms. Under the 2010 
Cancún Agreement, 
developed countries formalized voluntary pledges of quantified, economy‐wide 
emission reduction 
targets and some developing countries formalized voluntary pledges to 
mitigation actions. The 
distributional impact of the agreement will depend in part on the magnitude and 
sources of 
financing, although the scientific literature on this point is limited, because 
financing mechanisms 
are evolving more rapidly than respective scientific assessments (low evidence; 
low agreement). 
Under the 2011 Durban Platform for Enhanced Action, delegates agreed to craft a 
future legal 
regime that would be 'applicable to all Parties … under the Convention' and 
would include 
substantial new financial support and technology arrangements to benefit 
developing countries, but 
the delegates did not specify means for achieving those ends. [13.5.1.1, 
13.13.1.3, 16.2.1.1] 
As a complement to – or in the absence of — a new binding, international 
agreement on climate 
change, policy linkages among existing and future regional, national, and 
sub‐national climate 
policies offer potential climate mitigation benefits (medium evidence, medium 
agreement) [13.3.1, 
13.5.1.3, 13.5.3]. Linkages can be established between carbon markets and 
through regional 
cooperation, such as embodying mitigation objectives in trade agreements or the 
joint construction 
of infrastructures that facilitate reduction in carbon emissions [14.5]. 2 
        [RWL:   #4 seems to shorten the deleted material.  #5 seems to be 
favoring regional cooperation, which is OK for biochar.  International is being 
downplayed, but is still in #4 - but see deletions below that seem to downplay 
the international policy angles.


New #6  More on regions
Various regional initiatives between the national and global scales are either 
being developed or 
implemented, but their impact on global mitigation has been limited to date. 
(medium confidence) 
Many climate policies  can be more effective if implemented across geographical 
regions. [Table TS.9, 
13.13, 14.4, 14.5] 
Replaced
Regional initiatives – those between the national and global scales ‐ focused 
on mitigation are 
either being developed or implemented in many areas. Their impact on global 
mitigation has been 
limited to date. (medium confidence) Many climate policies could be more 
environmentally and 
economically effective if implemented across broad geographical regions because 
of the co‐location 
of infrastructures and trade advantages. Only in areas of deep integration 
(e.g., in the European 
Union) have such initiatives had an identifiable impact on mitigation through 
binding policies that 
include regulation and market‐based mechanisms. Many regional initiatives 
oriented around goals 
other than climate change, such as coordinated investments in natural gas and 
electricity grids as 
well as regional trade and investment agreements, are relevant for mitigation. 
Some new literature 
suggests that regional power pools and gas grids have supported the replacement 
of high‐emissions 
fuels with low emission or renewable energy sources, and that regional trade 
agreements with 
environmental agreement have on average modestly reduced emissions among 
participants. [14.4, 
14.5] 
        [RWL comment:  Doesn’t seem to impact biochar.  Main idea seems 
retained.


These two (old #5 and #7) apparently totally dropped  On International 
Cooperation

International cooperation may have a role in stimulating investment, financial 
incentives, and 
regulations to promote technological innovation and diffusion (medium evidence, 
medium 
agreement). Technology policy can help lower mitigation costs, thereby also 
increasing incentives for 
participation and compliance with international cooperative efforts, 
particularly in the long run. 
[1.4.4, 2.6, 3.5, 4.3, 13.3, 13.9] 

International cooperation regarding mitigation and adaptation policies and 
measures can be 
understood in the context of broader societal goals. Several framing concepts 
and principles can be 
brought to bear: maximizing global net benefits; equity, burden‐sharing, and 
related principles of 
distributive justice; precaution and prevention of future risks; and 
sustainable development. These 
criteria may at times conflict, forcing tradeoffs among them. Distributional 
equity and fairness may 
be considered important attributes of climate policy because of their impact on 
feasibility of 
international cooperation. [2.3, 3.10, 4.6, 13.2] 

 [RWL  Comment:   From a biochar perspective, the loss of these two last 
summary paragraphs are significant, since funding would seem to need 
international cooperation.

Overall,  I can now better understand the unhappiness of Prof.  Stavins - but 
maybe best to just live with that imperfection in a system that needs political 
input.  All the original is still around.

Ron




On Apr 27, 2014, at 3:20 PM, David Lewis <jrandomwin...@gmail.com> wrote:

> On the other hand, Robert Stavins has published his call to the three 
> Co-chairs of the AR5 WGIII ( cc'd to Pachauri) that the IPCC should tell all 
> people interested in this latest IPCC effort that they need to read the 
> entire 2,000 page plus document rather than the 33 page summary.  It matters, 
> when governments are involved, writes Stavins, if the document in question 
> was subject to government comment, or whether it was subject to government 
> approval.  He suggests the Summary For Policy Makers  should be called the 
> Summary By Policymakers from now on.  
> 
> He blogs that "the process the IPCC followed resulted in a process that built 
> political credibility by sacrificing scientific integrity."  In the part of 
> the SPM he was a Co-coordinating Lead Author on, "all" controversial text, 
> i.e. 75% of what they started with was removed.  The objections of one 
> country were enough to force removal of whatever they were objecting to.  It 
> didn't matter whether the country was rich or poor:  "any text that was 
> considered inconsistent with their interests and positions in multilateral 
> negotiations was treated as unacceptable."
> 
> He is publicly questioning whether the IPCC should continue to ask people 
> such as himself to "put enormous amounts of their time over multi-year 
> periods to carry out work that will inevitably be rejected"
> 
> If  Bolin were still around, I wonder what he would say in response to an 
> argument such as Stavins puts forward.
> 
> On Thursday, April 24, 2014 4:21:29 AM UTC-7, O Morton wrote:
> I kind of object to the idea that the SPM process constitutes "tampering by 
> politicians". First: it's the process, an intergovernmental process, that 
> gives the IPCC heft. It was baked into the design by Bert Bolin in order to 
> create a document that would fulfill politcal functions. If you don't want a 
> consensus document with heft that's fine. But if you do want one, you have to 
> explain how that could be achieved without having governments in the process. 
> Second: it sort of assumes that only the politicians bring the politics. 
> there's politics throughout the process of various sorts. The politicians' 
> are more overt. But they also remove politics (cf the removal of preliminary 
> matter in WGIII about ethics)
> 
> best, o
> 
> 

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