Thanks; reviewing now.
I see you put it in tutorials (this is for step by step exercises; screen snaps
etc..); I was expecting something quick for referencing :-)
Let me review ... whoa lots of writing :-)
Feedback in no particular order (and I am applying similar fixes to the other
tutorials as I have learned a lot since I wrote them):
- I like the content
- moving to advanced; as this is not part of the general introduction
- shortening the title
- removing the ..contents (as we now have the table of contents for the page in
the sidebar)
- removing the welcome to foss4g blurb
- changed your blurb a bit to describe how you rock out in the geotools codebase
- changed some of your tables to show up as tables.. you had ended the previous
line with "::" so they showed up as a code block
(http://sphinx.pocoo.org/rest.html#tables)
- replaced tabs with spaces
- made a few more headings so people can find their way in the tutorial
- made the instructions have numbered steps
- very few improvements to english (perhaps more a reflection on my lack
writing ability)
- only recommendation is the need of a couple pictures (I tried to add some
text explaining what world and pixel co-ordinates were)
I will commit again shortly.
--
Jody Garnett
On Thursday, 5 May 2011 at 10:45 PM, christian.muel...@nvoe.at wrote:
> Hi Jody, there is a new tutorial about affine transforms. Please
> check out from geotools trunk and review.
>
> Feel free to correct mistakes, alter the layout and improve my
> English. I will not make any changes until I hear something from you.
>
> Cheers
> Christian
>
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