Hello Christian, Jody, Just looking at the new page. It's an excellent addition - thanks !
I wonder if when the matrix notation is first introduced there could be a note (in one of those sphinx boxes) explaining that Mij means element in row i, column j. Some readers with matrix notation or confused that it is in y,x order Perhaps add a couple of links at the end for people wanting to find out more. The Wikipedia pages on matrix multiplication and affine transformation are good for adventurous readers... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Matrix_multiplication http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Affine_transformation Are there any links to this page from the user guide ? Thanks again, Michael On 6 May 2011 00:13, Jody Garnett <jody.garn...@gmail.com> wrote: > Thanks; reviewing now. > I see you put it in tutorials (this is for step by step exercises; screen > snaps etc..); I was expecting something quick for referencing :-) > Let me review ... whoa lots of writing :-) > Feedback in no particular order (and I am applying similar fixes to the > other tutorials as I have learned a lot since I wrote them): > - I like the content > - moving to advanced; as this is not part of the general introduction > - shortening the title > - removing the ..contents (as we now have the table of contents for the page > in the sidebar) > - removing the welcome to foss4g blurb > - changed your blurb a bit to describe how you rock out in the geotools > codebase > - changed some of your tables to show up as tables.. you had ended the > previous line with "::" so they showed up as a code block > (http://sphinx.pocoo.org/rest.html#tables) > - replaced tabs with spaces > - made a few more headings so people can find their way in the tutorial > - made the instructions have numbered steps > - very few improvements to english (perhaps more a reflection on my lack > writing ability) > - only recommendation is the need of a couple pictures (I tried to add some > text explaining what world and pixel co-ordinates were) > I will commit again shortly. > -- > Jody Garnett > > On Thursday, 5 May 2011 at 10:45 PM, christian.muel...@nvoe.at wrote: > > Hi Jody, there is a new tutorial about affine transforms. Please > check out from geotools trunk and review. > > Feel free to correct mistakes, alter the layout and improve my > English. I will not make any changes until I hear something from you. > > Cheers > Christian > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------- > This message was sent using IMP, the Internet Messaging Program. > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ > WhatsUp Gold - Download Free Network Management Software > The most intuitive, comprehensive, and cost-effective network > management toolset available today. Delivers lowest initial > acquisition cost and overall TCO of any competing solution. > http://p.sf.net/sfu/whatsupgold-sd > _______________________________________________ > Geotools-devel mailing list > Geotools-devel@lists.sourceforge.net > https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/geotools-devel > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ WhatsUp Gold - Download Free Network Management Software The most intuitive, comprehensive, and cost-effective network management toolset available today. Delivers lowest initial acquisition cost and overall TCO of any competing solution. http://p.sf.net/sfu/whatsupgold-sd _______________________________________________ Geotools-devel mailing list Geotools-devel@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/geotools-devel
