On Thu, Feb 25, 2010 at 10:21:18PM +0100, Doug Barton wrote:
> On 02/25/10 00:10, Antonio Querubin wrote:
> > On Mon, 22 Feb 2010, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
> > 
> >> I think it's out of scope of a *protocol* standard. However, I think Doug
> >> has a valid point, so maybe we should add an explicit statement that
> >> the document defines what should be transmitted and presented to humans,
> >> but does not define internal storage within an application or database.
> > 
> > The abstract and introduction seemed to already imply this but how about
> > 
> > s/This document also recommends a canonical representation format that
> > best avoids confusion./To avoid confusion this document recommends a
> > canonical text presentation format but does not define internal storage
> > formats within an application or database./
> 
> I like the idea, but IMO it's a little too redundant and repetitive. :)
> I thought some of Brian's wording was good, and some of yours, and I
> think that mentioning explicitly what IS first is a good idea. Something
> like:
> 
> This document defines a representation format for transmission and
> presentation to humans. It does not define a format for internal
> storage, such as within an application or database.

Adding one more to the beauty contest:

  This document defines a canonical textual representation format. It
  does not define a format for internal storage, such as within an
  application or database.

/js

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