Hosnieh, Some comments:
* In Section 1, you should probably remove some of the general discussion on security and privacy here. For instance, some of your definitions seem incomplete. * Section 6 is fine... but I don't think the rest of the stuff is needed. * Section 7 should probably be removed and just reference draft-6man-cooper-ipv6-addressing-privacy-considerations. Meta comment: If an implementation is going through the burden of implementing this algorithm, it might as well implement a good PRNG, and be done with it (if I understand correctly, the motivation for specifying this algorithm is that you don't have a good PRNG, right?). Thanks, Fernando On 08/08/2013 07:27 PM, Hosnieh Rafiee wrote: > Hello and thank you so much for your comments. > > > > I applied your comments and submitted a new version of the ra-privacy > draft. I also removed the text concerning the application layer based > lifetime from this draft. This draft, thus, just focuses on a few > updates to RFC 4941 that address some deficiencies. > > > > tools.ietf.org/html/draft-rafiee-6man-ra-privacy > > > > According to my discussions with some people during the IETF meetings, > some people thought that it would be better to have the discussion > /_about the application layer based lifetime in a separate document _/as > it seems that it is a new mechanism and should not be an update to RFC > 4941. In my update to that RFC , I just briefly mentioned that the node > "MIGHT" follow the other external policies for the lifetime and “Might” > not follow those of RFC 4941. > > > > > > If there are any other issues that I should consider for this draft, > please let me know. > > > > Thanks, > > Best, > > Hosnieh > -- Fernando Gont SI6 Networks e-mail: fg...@si6networks.com PGP Fingerprint: 6666 31C6 D484 63B2 8FB1 E3C4 AE25 0D55 1D4E 7492 -------------------------------------------------------------------- IETF IPv6 working group mailing list ipv6@ietf.org Administrative Requests: https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipv6 --------------------------------------------------------------------
