Gotta admit: I like it. That line about the Tequila Anaconda is great. A lot to spit out in one line--what my husband hates most about my obsession w/joni: 40 syllables per beat!!!
The line that speaks to me most? "You spend every sentence as if it were marked currency." (I can relate--my husband doesn't talk much.) Mary in California "if you want me, I'll be in the bar"
