On Wed, 9 Oct 2002, Jacques Nilo wrote: > We have three new pieces for the Bering documentation that will be released > with rc4 coming out shortly. > > We would welcome proofreading, comments and suggestions before release. > > 1 chapter in the Bering installation guide: > http://leaf.sf.net/devel/jnilo/bisystem.html > > 2 chapters in the Bering user's guide: > http://leaf.sf.net/devel/jnilo/butime.html
13.3.2 : preformat example commands 13.3.3 : preformat example commands 13.3.3 : activate link to arachnoid 13.3.3 : I am pretty sure the second Shorewall rule should be ACCEPT fw loc udp 37 13.5 : "See Bering Installation Guide" ... perhaps should be a link to ___, except that I don't see a section on /etc/lrp.conf to link to. Omit? Note: 13.5, 13.6, and 13.7 and 13.8 are all (effectively) mutually exclusive approaches to the optional setup of automatic time maintenance, and should be presented as part of the same section 13.5... perhaps 13.5.1, 13.5.2, 13.5.3, and 13.5.4. 13.6 : b/ ... "timsersever" should be "timeserver" 13.7 : not having done this, I wonder whether "svi ntpsimpl restart" is needed. 13.9 : Spelling: "Miscellaneous" --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jeff Newmiller The ..... ..... Go Live... DCN:<[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Basics: ##.#. ##.#. Live Go... Live: OO#.. Dead: OO#.. Playing Research Engineer (Solar/Batteries O.O#. #.O#. with /Software/Embedded Controllers) .OO#. .OO#. rocks...2k --------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------- This sf.net email is sponsored by:ThinkGeek Welcome to geek heaven. http://thinkgeek.com/sf _______________________________________________ leaf-devel mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/leaf-devel