On Mon, Dec 17, 2012 at 1:25 AM, Simonas Leleiva <simonas.lele...@gmail.com>wrote:
> > { And thanks to a mysterious unnamed someone who changed "mold" into > "get" :) Yes, my non biased proof-reader also did not want mold in > their tea :D } > > +1 > > NemoMobile > > > The future of mobile computing is in our hands - today. (sounds too long to me compared to the original, was just the 'computing' word added?)... > > Presenting Linux for your mobile. > > Feature rich. Free and open source. First of its kind. > > The heart of NemoMobile is a lightweight Linux distro called Mer. It > can power a wide range of devices: from interactive alarm clocks to > car entertainment systems and smart TVs. > Now this seems to say much more about Mer, but if I'm just arriving I'll ask "So what's that NemoMobile??". Also, heart can be interested differently by different developers / landers on the page. > > Become a NemoMobile developer and enjoy the freedom. Nemo-power your > mobile phone, tablet, LCD shopping list on your fridge, ... , and > share the experience! If you get it to make tea, invite us! The more > -> Nemo power again to the uninitiated could be a bit problematic, so again I'd suggest 'Use it to power your mobile phone,....,'. -> "if you got it to make tea,.." > users the merrier. The more feedback the better. > > It's fun, we're excited and a friendly community. Interested? Join us > at IRC http://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=#nemomobile or leave a > comment here. Let's influence the future of mobile, together! > > 'It's fun and we're a friendly community. " should be better. (drop the excitement altogether) -Sivan