Hi, I have some mostly cosmetic comments on this draft.
o "YANG" should be spelled "YANG". Not Yang etc. o "NETCONF" should be spelled "NETCONF". o leaf-list module The type of this leaf-list is a string with: pattern '.+@\d{4}-\d{2}-\d{2}\.yang'; I think the revision needs to be optional, and the suffix ".yang" dropped, since it doesn't add any value: pattern '.+(@\d{4}-\d{2}-\d{2})?'; (same for inline-spec). o schema-uri The description says: A reference to another YANG instance data file. This instance data file will use the same set of target YANG modules, revisions, supported features and deviations as the referenced YANG instance data file. I don't understand what this means. Does it mean that the schema for this document is the same as the schema defined in the schema-uri file, or that the schema-uri file defines the schema in its content-data? I *think* it is the former. In either case, the name of the leaf can perhaps be changed to reflect the semantics, rather than the syntax (i.e., don't call it xxx-uri just b/c its type is an uri). Perhaps 'same-schema-as-file'. o Data node naming. The current structure of the model is: +--rw (content-schema-spec)? | +--:(simplified-inline) | +--rw module* string | +--:(inline) | | +--rw inline-spec* string | | +--rw inline-content-schema <anydata> | +--:(uri) | +--rw schema-uri? inet:uri ... +--rw content-data? <anydata> To make the instance document more understandable, I suggest the following structure, which adds a wrapping container for the schema, and renames the inline and uri nodes: +--rw content-schema +--rw (content-schema-spec)? | +--:(simplified-inline) | +--rw module* string | +--:(inline) | | +--rw inline-module* string | | +--rw inline-schema <anydata> | +--:(uri) | +--rw same-schema-as-file? inet:uri ... +--rw content-data? <anydata> o Format the YANG module I suggest you run the YANG module through: pyang -f yang --keep-comments --yang-line-length 69 o 3.2 The element "<netconf-state>" needs a namespace declaration. /martin /martin _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod