Tom, Thank you very much for the review and comments. So there is no duplicated work in OpsArea?
Authors of the draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model: Can you please update the draft per Tom's comments. Linda. -----Original Message----- From: tom petch [mailto:ie...@btconnect.com] Sent: Tuesday, December 11, 2018 5:22 AM To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dun...@huawei.com>; opsawg@ietf.org Cc: i2...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] is there any work in Ops Area for monitoring network functions? Linda I looked at the draft and think that it needs some work before it is a YANG module:-) - NMDA conformance is not mentioned - the reference to RFC2119 is out of date - the format for tree diagrams is now specified in RFC8340 - YANG import statements lack 'reference' as in import ietf-inet-types { prefix "inet"; reference "RFC 6991 - Common YANG Data Types"; - YANG module has no copyright - YANG module has (almost) no reference statements to tell the user (like me) whereto go to understand it. look, for example, at draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang for a module that is well supplied with reference statements - YANG module should reference the RFC from which it comes - the one and only reference in the YANG module is reference "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07"; but the I-D is draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06 I do not understand - where you reference an I-D, it needs a Note to the RFC Editor e.g. reference "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07"; becomes reference RFC YYYY "....." -- Note to RFC Editor please replace YYYY with the number assigned to "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring" - IANA Considerations must be present - Security Considerations must include the YANG template HTH:-) I am not on the I2NSF list. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Linda Dunbar" <linda.dun...@huawei.com> To: <opsawg@ietf.org> Cc: <i2...@ietf.org> Sent: Wednesday, December 05, 2018 5:27 PM > OpsaWG: > > I2NSF WG has a draft on data models (and information model) of monitoring network security functions: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0 6 > > It includes data models to retrieve System Alarms, System Events, counters, NSF Events/logs, etc. > > Want to see if there are data models already specified by Ops Area for monitoring network functions which might have some common attributes that I2NSF can import. > > Thanks, Linda Dunbar > > From: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong [mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com] > Sent: Thursday, November 15, 2018 6:35 PM > To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dun...@huawei.com<mailto:linda.dun...@huawei.com>>; Yoav Nir <ynir.i...@gmail.com<mailto:ynir.i...@gmail.com>> > Cc: i2...@ietf.org<mailto:i2...@ietf.org>; skku_secu-brain_...@googlegroups.com<mailto:skku_secu-brain_all@googlegr oups.com>; Sangwon Hyun <swhyu...@gmail.com<mailto:swhyu...@gmail.com>>; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.p...@gmail.com<mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com>> > Subject: Request for WG Adoption Call on NSF Monitoring Draft > > Hi Linda and Yoav, > As we discussed the last Bangkok meeting, I have merged the two drafts > of Information Model and Data Model for NSF Monitoring into a new > draft called draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06: > > - Two Information and Data Model Drafts . > draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07 > . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-05 > > - A Merged Data Model Draft > . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06 > . https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0 6 > > The NSF monitoring is very important to manage the I2NSF security service system > in a reliable and scalable fashion. > > Could you start a WG adoption call for this draft? > > Thanks. > > Best Regards, > Paul > -- > =========================== > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. > Associate Professor > Department of Software > Sungkyunkwan University > Office: +82-31-299-4957 > Email: jaehoon.p...@gmail.com<mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com>, paulje...@skku.edu<mailto:paulje...@skku.edu> > Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php<http://cpslab.skku.edu/p eople-jaehoon-jeong.php> _______________________________________________ OPSAWG mailing list OPSAWG@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
