Hi Linda, We authors will reflect Tom's comments on the revision. Thanks.
Best Regards, Paul On Wed, Dec 12, 2018 at 1:12 AM Linda Dunbar <linda.dun...@huawei.com> wrote: > Tom, > > Thank you very much for the review and comments. So there is no duplicated > work in OpsArea? > > > Authors of the draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model: Can you please > update the draft per Tom's comments. > > Linda. > > -----Original Message----- > From: tom petch [mailto:ie...@btconnect.com] > Sent: Tuesday, December 11, 2018 5:22 AM > To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dun...@huawei.com>; opsawg@ietf.org > Cc: i2...@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] is there any work in Ops Area for monitoring network > functions? > > Linda > > I looked at the draft and think that it needs some work before it is a > YANG module:-) > > - NMDA conformance is not mentioned > > - the reference to RFC2119 is out of date > > - the format for tree diagrams is now specified in RFC8340 > > - YANG import statements lack 'reference' as in > import ietf-inet-types { > prefix "inet"; > reference "RFC 6991 - Common YANG Data Types"; > > - YANG module has no copyright > > - YANG module has (almost) no reference statements to tell the user (like > me) whereto go to understand it. look, for example, at > draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang for a module that is well supplied with > reference statements > > - YANG module should reference the RFC from which it comes > > - the one and only reference in the YANG module is > reference > "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07"; > but the I-D is > draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06 > I do not understand > > - where you reference an I-D, it needs a Note to the RFC Editor e.g. > reference "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07"; > becomes > reference RFC YYYY "....." > -- Note to RFC Editor please replace YYYY with the number assigned to > "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring" > > - IANA Considerations must be present > > - Security Considerations must include the YANG template > > HTH:-) > > I am not on the I2NSF list. > > Tom Petch > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Linda Dunbar" <linda.dun...@huawei.com> > To: <opsawg@ietf.org> > Cc: <i2...@ietf.org> > Sent: Wednesday, December 05, 2018 5:27 PM > > > OpsaWG: > > > > I2NSF WG has a draft on data models (and information model) of > monitoring network security functions: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0 > 6 > > > > It includes data models to retrieve System Alarms, System Events, > counters, NSF Events/logs, etc. > > > > Want to see if there are data models already specified by Ops Area for > monitoring network functions which might have some common attributes that > I2NSF can import. > > > > Thanks, Linda Dunbar > > > > From: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong [mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com] > > Sent: Thursday, November 15, 2018 6:35 PM > > To: Linda Dunbar > <linda.dun...@huawei.com<mailto:linda.dun...@huawei.com>>; Yoav Nir < > ynir.i...@gmail.com<mailto:ynir.i...@gmail.com>> > > Cc: i2...@ietf.org<mailto:i2...@ietf.org>; > skku_secu-brain_...@googlegroups.com<mailto:skku_secu-brain_all@googlegr > oups.com>; Sangwon Hyun <swhyu...@gmail.com<mailto:swhyu...@gmail.com>>; > Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong > <jaehoon.p...@gmail.com<mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com>> > > Subject: Request for WG Adoption Call on NSF Monitoring Draft > > > > Hi Linda and Yoav, > > As we discussed the last Bangkok meeting, I have merged the two drafts > > of Information Model and Data Model for NSF Monitoring into a new > > draft called > draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06: > > > > - Two Information and Data Model Drafts . > > draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07 > > . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-05 > > > > - A Merged Data Model Draft > > . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06 > > . > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0 > 6 > > > > The NSF monitoring is very important to manage the I2NSF security > service system > > in a reliable and scalable fashion. > > > > Could you start a WG adoption call for this draft? > > > > Thanks. > > > > Best Regards, > > Paul > > -- > > =========================== > > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. > > Associate Professor > > Department of Software > > Sungkyunkwan University > > Office: +82-31-299-4957 > > Email: jaehoon.p...@gmail.com<mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com>, > paulje...@skku.edu<mailto:paulje...@skku.edu> > > Personal Homepage: > http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php<http://cpslab.skku.edu/p > eople-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>> > > -- =========================== Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. Associate Professor Department of Software Sungkyunkwan University Office: +82-31-299-4957 Email: jaehoon.p...@gmail.com, paulje...@skku.edu Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
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