Hi Tom,
Thanks for your good comments and guidance.
We authors will reflect your comments and guidance on the revision of the
NSF Monitoring Data Model draft.
One thing to note is that
draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07 (which is the NSF Monitoring
Information Model draft)
was merged into draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06, so we do not
need to reference it in
our data model draft.
Except this, others will be reflected on the revision.
Thanks.
Best Regards,
Paul
On Tue, Dec 11, 2018 at 8:22 PM tom petch <ie...@btconnect.com> wrote:
> Linda
>
> I looked at the draft and think that it needs some work before it is a
> YANG module:-)
>
> - NMDA conformance is not mentioned
>
> - the reference to RFC2119 is out of date
>
> - the format for tree diagrams is now specified in RFC8340
>
> - YANG import statements lack 'reference' as in
> import ietf-inet-types {
> prefix "inet";
> reference "RFC 6991 - Common YANG Data Types";
>
> - YANG module has no copyright
>
> - YANG module has (almost) no reference statements to tell the user
> (like me) whereto go to understand it. look, for example, at
> draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang
> for a module that is well supplied with reference statements
>
> - YANG module should reference the RFC from which it comes
>
> - the one and only reference in the YANG module is
> reference
> "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07";
> but the I-D is
> draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06
> I do not understand
>
> - where you reference an I-D, it needs a Note to the RFC Editor e.g.
> reference "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07";
> becomes
> reference RFC YYYY "....."
> -- Note to RFC Editor please replace YYYY with the number assigned to
> "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring"
>
> - IANA Considerations must be present
>
> - Security Considerations must include the YANG template
>
> HTH:-)
>
> I am not on the I2NSF list.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Linda Dunbar" <linda.dun...@huawei.com>
> To: <opsawg@ietf.org>
> Cc: <i2...@ietf.org>
> Sent: Wednesday, December 05, 2018 5:27 PM
>
> > OpsaWG:
> >
> > I2NSF WG has a draft on data models (and information model) of
> monitoring network security functions:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0
> 6
> >
> > It includes data models to retrieve System Alarms, System Events,
> counters, NSF Events/logs, etc.
> >
> > Want to see if there are data models already specified by Ops Area for
> monitoring network functions which might have some common attributes
> that I2NSF can import.
> >
> > Thanks, Linda Dunbar
> >
> > From: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong [mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com]
> > Sent: Thursday, November 15, 2018 6:35 PM
> > To: Linda Dunbar
> <linda.dun...@huawei.com<mailto:linda.dun...@huawei.com>>; Yoav Nir
> <ynir.i...@gmail.com<mailto:ynir.i...@gmail.com>>
> > Cc: i2...@ietf.org<mailto:i2...@ietf.org>;
> skku_secu-brain_...@googlegroups.com<mailto:skku_secu-brain_all@googlegr
> oups.com>; Sangwon Hyun <swhyu...@gmail.com<mailto:swhyu...@gmail.com>>;
> Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
> <jaehoon.p...@gmail.com<mailto:jaehoon.p...@gmail.com>>
> > Subject: Request for WG Adoption Call on NSF Monitoring Draft
> >
> > Hi Linda and Yoav,
> > As we discussed the last Bangkok meeting,
> > I have merged the two drafts of Information Model and Data Model
> > for NSF Monitoring into a new draft called
> draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06:
> >
> > - Two Information and Data Model Drafts
> > . draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07
> > . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-05
> >
> > - A Merged Data Model Draft
> > . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06
> > .
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0
> 6
> >
> > The NSF monitoring is very important to manage the I2NSF security
> service system
> > in a reliable and scalable fashion.
> >
> > Could you start a WG adoption call for this draft?
> >
> > Thanks.
> >
> > Best Regards,
> > Paul
> > --
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> > Associate Professor
> > Department of Software
> > Sungkyunkwan University
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