Hi Wenxiang, Thank you for catching those. This is fixed in https://github.com/IETF-OPSAWG-WG/policy-based-network-acl/pull/112/files (with some other nits).
Cheers, Med (as author) De : 吕文祥(联通集团本部) <[email protected]> Envoyé : mercredi 1 octobre 2025 01:30 À : Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[email protected]>; opsawg <[email protected]> Objet : [OPSAWG]Re: WG LC: A YANG Data Model and RADIUS Extension for Policy-based Network Access Control (draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl) Hi Chairs, all, This draft is well written and it provides a generic mechanism for policy based network access control, widely applicable to various enterprise network/campus network scenario, allow group to group communication. I believe it can be seen as one important SASE solution. A few nits I suggest authors to consider: 1.Section 4.1 OLT TEXT: "If the authentication request succeeds, the user is placed in a user group the identity of which is returned to the network access server as the authentication result (see Section 7)." NEW TEXT : "If the authentication reguest succeeds, the user is placed in a user group, the identity of such user group is returned to the network access server as the authentication result (see Section 7)." 2.Section 1 Can you provide a reference for access entitlement? I can understand it means, but can not find a good reference. I support its publication. Best Regards, Wenxiang ________________________________ [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> From: Joe Clarke (jclarke)<mailto:[email protected]> Date: 2025-09-29 22:24 To: opsawg<mailto:[email protected]> Subject: [OPSAWG]Re: WG LC: A YANG Data Model and RADIUS Extension for Policy-based Network Access Control (draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl) Hello, WG. We’re extending the WG LC on this by a week until October 6 to hopefully get a couple of DIR reviews and some more comments from the WG itself. Please, take the time to read this and comment on its readiness. Thanks. Joe and Benoît From: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Date: Monday, September 15, 2025 at 09:14 To: opsawg <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> Subject: WG LC: A YANG Data Model and RADIUS Extension for Policy-based Network Access Control (draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl) Hello, opsawg. With the IPR disclosure done (no known IPR has been disclosed) and a new -08 revision, we are ready to begin a two week WG LC for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ucl-acl/. Please reply to the list with comments and support for this work being ready to move forward to the IESG for publication. The WG LC will run until September 29. Thanks. Joe and Benoît ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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