Re: slogan for NMAP

[S.J.F.ELECTRICAL.]

 I would like to re-arrange all suggestions so Women come before midwives eg "Women and Midwives Labouring Together for a Better Birthing Future" instead of "Midwives and Women Labouring Together for a Better Birthing Future"   Also I appreciated Rhonda's comments, insights into marketing so for example I would reduce the above to a more succinct (or rather my mother would have told me it was repetitious if I had written it in a school assignment!) "Women and Midwives Labouring  for a Better Future"   Denise   ----- Original Message ----- From: JoFromOz To: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Friday, June 21, 2002 10:18 AM Subject: Re: slogan for NMAP I think a combination:   "Midwives and Women Labouring Together for a Better Birthing Future"   My 2cents :)   Jo