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Ok - leaving out Women in view of the male aspect -
"Look who's labouring for a better future!" And then you could add
what you wanted in small print. Funny - you tell people to look and
they do!
-------Original Message-------
Date: Friday, June 21,
2002 23:16:39
Subject: Re: slogan for
NMAP
I would like to re-arrange all suggestions so
Women come before midwives
eg
"Women and
Midwives Labouring Together for a Better Birthing Future" instead of
"Midwives and Women Labouring
Together for a Better Birthing Future"
Also I appreciated Rhonda's
comments, insights into marketing so for example I would reduce the above
to a more succinct (or rather my mother would have told me it was
repetitious if I had written it in a school assignment!)
"Women and
Midwives Labouring for a Better Future"
Denise
----- Original Message -----
Sent: Friday, June 21, 2002 10:18
AM
Subject: Re: slogan for NMAP
I think a combination:
"Midwives and Women Labouring
Together for a Better Birthing Future"
My 2cents :)
Jo
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