For me, the placement of the people at the right part of the frame is correct; they appear to feel pity and revulsion for the old woman and are trying to pass as far away as possible, almost moving out of the picture, although their shadows will pass over her, which is all the interaction they're comfortable with.

It would look tidier if they were completely within the frame, but it would lose the effective visual and emotional tension that appears to me. A good shot.

Pat White


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