I don't agree. Sometimes, for me, it is about  the light on the leaves, the 
curve of a branch, etc., not about the whole tree.  Just like I might take 
someone's hands and not shoot them full body. This one  was about the light on 
the 
leaves and the contrast between them and the dark of  the pine boles.

But maybe you'll like this  better:

http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/yellowtree.htm

Very  quick edit in response to your post, I might play with a bit more if I 
was  posting it as the original PESO. Maybe lighten it a tad and tone down the 
 highlights in the left corner. Although I did lighten up the pine boles. And 
I  had about four shots this way, and maybe I didn't pick out the best one. 
But...  

I like the other better.

HTH, Marnie aka Doe  :-)

==============
I definitely like the colors and of course the  subject.  Having taken many 
tree shots I'll give you a dose of my own  self-criticism.  Don't take it 
personally as a severe critique. OK.  :-)

I always have a problem with trees that are cutoff at both ends, top  and 
bottom.  For some reason, to my eye, aesthetically one should  always be able 
to see the tops or the bottoms of the trees, unless it is a  total abstract 
shot or an extreme closeup.

My feeling about this is  about the same as if you showed me a people shot 
with their heads and feet  out of the frame.

I always strive to somehow have at least a total tree  in my shots and if I 
can't, I'll generally opt for showing the entire trunk  and losing part of 
the top as opposed to showing the top(s) with cutoff  trunks.

It may just be my own personal aesthetics, but I've gradually  come to these 
conclusions.

Tom C.



> > This is  very typical of Yosemite in the fall, lots of  dark pines,
> >  interspersed with brightly colored yellow-leaved trees (not sure
> >  what they were).
> > Mainly right next to the road, and about 1/4 of  the road in  does
> > have trees right
> > next to it.  So, what I am trying to say, it was incredibly
> > beautiful,  dark,
> > yellow, dark, yellow...
> >
> > Typical  Yosemite color anyway,  this time unartified, unmucked with.
> >  If you
> > think I should bring up the shadows  more, just  say  so.
> >
> >  http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/leaves.htm
> >
> >  Comments  welcome.
> >
> > Marnie aka Doe :-)  




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