On Thu, 8 Jan 2009 03:58:16 +0100, "Tim Øsleby" <maritim...@gmail.com>
said:
> #1 gets my vote.
> 
> But I'm not 100% sure you have nailed the framing perfectly. I believe
> I find it too balanced vertically. If it was mine, I would have tried
> cropping out or burning the last foot print.
> 
> But don't get me wrong. It's a good photograph, as is.



Thanks Tim.

You're probably right about the framing.  I'm forever kicking myself for
not trying a range of different compositions of a subject - can't quite
get it into my head that I don't have to worry about 'wasting film'.

:-)>


Cheers

Brian

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Western Sydney Australia
http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/





> 2009/1/5 Brian Walters <supera1...@fastmail.fm>:
> > G'day all
> >
> > I'm looking for a bit of PDML objectivity with these two images -
> > because I've lost mine.  I've been looking at the damn things for so
> > long, I oscillate between thoughts of "not bad" and "what a crock of
> > s**t"..... and back again.
> >
> > These are similar images taken at dusk on a south coast beach (New South
> > Wales).  I've given up on colour renderings (dirty colours, noisy), so
> > mono conversion is the last straw.
> >
> > Comments and (particularly) suggestions most appreciated.
> >
> > http://www.blognow.com.au/PESO/108276/Tracks_1.html
> >
> > http://www.blognow.com.au/PESO/108277/Tracks_2.html
> >
> >
> >
> > Thanks and Cheers
> >
> > Brian
> >
> > ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> > Brian Walters
> > Western Sydney Australia
> > http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/
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