OK, easy for me to say. I like this better than the first. Here's what I think:
1. Since the mill is the main subject, this wide angle shot lessens it's impact a bit too much. My feeling is that the mill needs to have a slightly larger footprint in the image. Maybe a few feet closer and a slightly lower vantage point would still allow for ample foreground stream and background sky. 2. IMO, the people detract from the scene. I don't think they add a sense of scale in this case, as we all generally know the size of this type of structure. They strike me as touristy as well. 3. Did you do any post-capture sharpening? The image seems a tad soft overall. Love the sky and foreground leading in. This is a great subject and my comments are not meant as negativity, just feedback. Tom C. On Sun, Apr 18, 2010 at 9:19 PM, John Sessoms <jsessoms...@nc.rr.com> wrote: > Another photo of Yates Mill in Raleigh, NC. > > http://www.flickr.com/photos/jb_sessoms/4532688343/sizes/m/ > > K20D, Sigma 10-20 > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
