Err ok not that brutal! so how do I fix it, since this was the test what do I do better next time.
--- Shel Belinkoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > The photos I looked at are terrible. Apart from > everything else, Luba's > posing is atrocious - there's not an interesting, > seductive, exciting, > stimulating, or provocative pose in any of the > images. In many shots > she actually looks uncomfortable. There's nothing > "natural" about her > poses. In most the backgrounds are distracting. > The ones on the bench > by the brick wall show her as being particularly > uncomfortable. Many of > the photos are not sharp and seem to be focused > poorly. There's a > boring sameness to the ones that you shot from a low > angle. Too much > sky in those shots, too. If I were your editor I'd > suggest doing the > entire shoot over again, and get her to relax and > relate to you and the > environment. I get a sense of two people just going > through the motions > ... there doesn't seem to be any connection or > relationship between the > two of you. The shoot feels like it was done > mechanically, without much > rapor and interaction. > > Sorry Brendan, IMO these shots are pretty bad. > > Brendan wrote: > > > > This is the little test shoot I did for the models > > redo, I'd like some > > advise and comments ( be brutal!! please ) I only > used > > the MZ-3 and > > 50mm f1.7 film was kodak gold 200, AF500FTZ for > fill > > flash and a 42" > > white and silver reflector. I will be using fuji > NPC > > for the real > > shoot but it will be in the same location. I ran > into > > 2 problems, > > kodak gold is not great for skin tones and the > tiffen > > polarizer > > FLARES!!!! I tried a few back lit shots with the > > polarizer and I got > > lots of flare :-( . the photos lub1 thru 14 are > what > > I'm showing her, > > I'll post the flare shots and shots ignored later > > > > the url is here > > > > http://webhome.idirect.com/~trini/model/luba > > > > She is quite happy tho :-) > > > > > ______________________________________________________________________ > > Find, Connect, Date! http://personals.yahoo.ca > > - > > This message is from the Pentax-Discuss Mail List. > To unsubscribe, > > go to http://www.pdml.net and follow the > directions. Don't forget to > > visit the Pentax Users' Gallery at > http://pug.komkon.org . > > -- > Shel Belinkoff > mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > http://home.earthlink.net/~belinkoff/ > http://home.earthlink.net/~belinkoff/darkroom-rentals/index.html > - > This message is from the Pentax-Discuss Mail List. > To unsubscribe, > go to http://www.pdml.net and follow the directions. > Don't forget to > visit the Pentax Users' Gallery at > http://pug.komkon.org . > ______________________________________________________________________ Find, Connect, Date! http://personals.yahoo.ca - This message is from the Pentax-Discuss Mail List. To unsubscribe, go to http://www.pdml.net and follow the directions. Don't forget to visit the Pentax Users' Gallery at http://pug.komkon.org .
