That's an interesting shot. What I think it needs is for the locks on the outside to have more breathing space - more distance from the frame edge - and for the margin around the edge to be equal all round.
B > -----Original Message----- > From: PDML [mailto:pdml-boun...@pdml.net] On Behalf Of George Sinos > Sent: 29 March 2013 16:55 > To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List > Subject: PESO - mailbox - interrupted pattern > > I need a little feedback on this one. I'm not sure it's worth pursuing. > > <http://www.georgesphotos.net/Other/Misc- > private/1804874_X84PMn#!i=2431403562&k=nbGb2Bd&lb=1&s=A> > > The lock on my mailbox broke and had to be replaced. It struck me as > something that could be used as an example of a broken pattern. > > I've played with it a bit and looked at it until I'm cross-eyed. I > can't tell if it's straight and level or a tiny bit crooked. I'm also > not sure about the composition. The lock on box 7 is dead-center in > the frame, I don't think I like that. Maybe a rectangular crop > eliminating the top row of boxes might look better. > > Is this worth the trouble to mess with or is it one of those "camera > club" photos that no-one but a photographer would look at? > > Thanks for any input, gs. > > George Sinos > -------------------- > www.GeorgesPhotos.net > www.GeorgeSinos.com > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
