When I saw the comments about cropping a bit (before I actually looked at it) i moved it around to see if I agreed with the suggested trim offthe top... which drew -my- eye to the little puff of black smoke above the center of the top of the arch... , which caused me also to not the blackening of thestone in some of the crannies... I accepted the missing chink as part of the pattern.

ann


On 9/8/2016 11:34 AM, Alan C wrote:
It's interesting how people see things differently. The first thing I focused on was the missing block.

Alan C

-----Original Message----- From: Ken Waller
Sent: Thursday, September 08, 2016 5:28 PM
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Subject: Re: PESO: Arch

I agree Igor. Cutting out about half of the blank sky above the arch would be an improvement by forcing the eye to concentrate more on the arch.


-----Original Message-----
From: Igor PDML-StR <pdml...@komkon.org>
Subject: PESO: Arch


Dan,

It's a fine image, nicely taken.
But from the moment I saw it, I couldn't get rid of the desire to reframe
it so that the arch would move up (leaving less empty space at the top).
I am not sure, it is likely that that would bring some portion of the
top of the arch (maybe the top of the head?) to the 2/3 horizontal line)?

(And I understand that you've left Greece already...)

Cheers,

Igor


Daniel J. Matyola Wed, 07 Sep 2016 20:02:08 -0700 wrote:

Architectural detail:
http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=18282482&size=lg
K-5 IIs. DA 18-135 zoom
Comments invited.




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