Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11

2016-05-21 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
> On May 18, 2016, at 9:29 PM 5/18/16, Jari Arkko wrote: > > Thanks for your review, Ralph! You're welcome. I'm glad to hear you found the review valuable. Responses in line... > > I do think some of the points you raised need to be addressed. Inline: > >> >> # >> >> I often react to

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11

2016-04-28 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
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[Gen-art] Gem-Art review of draft-ietf-lager-specification-11

2016-04-19 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
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Re: [Gen-art] Gem-Art review for draft-ietf-httpauth-scram-auth-14

2016-01-05 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
Confirming that rev -15 addresses my Gen-ART review comments... - Ralph > On Dec 16, 2015, at 11:19 AM 12/16/15, Ralph Droms (rdroms) > wrote: > > >> On Dec 16, 2015, at 10:47 AM 12/16/15, Alexey Melnikov >> wrote: >> >> Hi Ralph, >> Thank you

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07

2015-12-16 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
> On Dec 7, 2015, at 1:31 PM 12/7/15, Stephane Bortzmeyer > wrote: > > On Tue, Dec 01, 2015 at 01:55:46PM +0000, > Ralph Droms (rdroms) wrote > a message of 128 lines which said: > >> Would you consider adding a little text somewhere to make it clear >> t

Re: [Gen-art] Gem-Art review for draft-ietf-httpauth-scram-auth-14

2015-12-16 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
in rev -15? - Ralph > > On 09/12/2015 20:47, Ralph Droms (rdroms) wrote: >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> Nicely written, very clear document. > Thank you. >> idnits reports some lines too long and an unused reference. > I fixed the reference in my copy. I hope RFC

[Gen-art] Gem-Art review for draft-ietf-httpauth-scram-auth-14

2015-12-09 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07

2015-12-01 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
> On Nov 26, 2015, at 7:41 AM 11/26/15, Stephane Bortzmeyer > wrote: > > On Fri, Nov 20, 2015 at 04:22:21PM +0000, > Ralph Droms (rdroms) wrote > a message of 97 lines which said: > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for >> draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimis

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07

2015-11-20 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draf

[Gen-art] Gem-Art Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07

2015-11-20 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-07.txt. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draf

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-26 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
5, Shah, Himanshu wrote: > > Thanks Andy. > He did re-send the email without MIME and I was able to read and reply. > > Thanks, > Himanshu > > From: Andrew G. Malis [mailto:agma...@gmail.com] > Sent: Monday, October 26, 2015 2:08 PM > To: Shah, Himanshu > C

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-26 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
> Now with the draft.. > > Thanks, > Himanshu > > > -Original Message- > From: Shah, Himanshu > Sent: Saturday, October 24, 2015 5:52 PM > To: 'Ralph Droms (rdroms)' > Cc: 'A. Jean Mahoney'; 'General Area Review Team'; > 'dra

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-26 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
> Now with the draft.. > > Thanks, > Himanshu > > > -Original Message- > From: Shah, Himanshu > Sent: Saturday, October 24, 2015 5:52 PM > To: 'Ralph Droms (rdroms)' > Cc: 'A. Jean Mahoney'; 'General Area Review Team'; > 'dra

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-22 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
es for the inaccuracy. - Ralph > On Oct 22, 2015, at 11:31 AM 10/22/15, Shah, Himanshu wrote: > > Aahh! Finally got it with content!!.. > > Let me go through your email.. > > Thanks, > Himanshu > > > -----Original Message- > From: Ralph Droms (rdroms) [mailt

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-22 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
t; Himanshu > > From: Ralph Droms (rdroms) [mailto:rdr...@cisco.com] > Sent: Thursday, October 22, 2015 11:20 AM > To: Shah, Himanshu > Cc: A. Jean Mahoney; General Area Review Team; > draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd@ietf.org; The IESG > Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-22 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
are two implementations of this draft deployed in a > Telco network > in Asia. Noted. > > > Thanks, > Himanshu > > > -Original Message- > From: Ralph Droms (rdroms) [mailto:rdr...@cisco.com] > Sent: Wednesday, October 14, 2015 4:02 PM > To: A. Jean Mahoney; General

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-22 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
ns of this draft deployed in a > Telco network > in Asia. Noted. > > > Thanks, > Himanshu > > > -Original Message- > From: Ralph Droms (rdroms) [mailto:rdr...@cisco.com] > Sent: Wednesday, October 14, 2015 4:02 PM > To: A. Jean Mahoney; General Are

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-16 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
n a > Telco network > in Asia. Noted. > > > Thanks, > Himanshu > > > -Original Message- > From: Ralph Droms (rdroms) [mailto:rdr...@cisco.com] > Sent: Wednesday, October 14, 2015 4:02 PM > To: A. Jean Mahoney; General Area Review Team; > draft-ie

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-14 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pals-mpls-tp-mac-wd

2015-10-14 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-solmaxrt-update-03

2013-09-13 Thread Ralph Droms (rdroms)
Dan - thanks for your review. Responses in line; edits will appear in the -04 rev. - Ralph On Aug 25, 2013, at 7:29 AM 8/25/13, "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" wrote: > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at > >

[Gen-art] RE: gen-art review of draft-ietf-ipv6-2461bis-09.txt

2006-11-27 Thread Ralph Droms \(rdroms\)
Comment about DHCPv6 question in line... - Ralph -Original Message- From: Soliman, Hesham [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Wed 11/22/2006 4:51 AM To: Scott W Brim; General Area Review Team; Jari Arkko; Mark Townsley (townsley); Bob Hinden; Brian Haberman; Thomas Narten; Erik Nordmark; Wi