Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-30 Thread Christine Aguila
Hi Bruce:  I'm not sure if I commented on this photo before, but if so, I have 
looked at it again.  The lighting and pose are very nice.  In general, I don't 
have a problem with cropping some of the subject's head out, but I think in 
this frame the bottom is a little heavy with the arm pose-- therefore, making 
the frame seem a bit cramped at the top and out of compositional balance.  Just 
a thought.  YMMV.  Cheers, Christine






On Aug 19, 2013, at 7:59 PM, Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com wrote:

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).
 
 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh
 
 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.
 
 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture
 
 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.
 
 Comments welcome!
 
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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-30 Thread Bruce Walker
I appreciate you taking time to have a second look, Christine, and
thank you very much for your thoughts!


On Fri, Aug 30, 2013 at 9:35 AM, Christine Aguila christ...@caguila.com wrote:
 Hi Bruce:  I'm not sure if I commented on this photo before, but if so, I 
 have looked at it again.  The lighting and pose are very nice.  In general, I 
 don't have a problem with cropping some of the subject's head out, but I 
 think in this frame the bottom is a little heavy with the arm pose-- 
 therefore, making the frame seem a bit cramped at the top and out of 
 compositional balance.  Just a thought.  YMMV.  Cheers, Christine






 On Aug 19, 2013, at 7:59 PM, Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com wrote:

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

 Comments welcome!

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-27 Thread Derby Chang


Just saw this. I like the current style of cropping the top of the head. 
Peter Hurley-esque. It makes the portrait intimate, I think. Not too 
sure about the crop on the fingers though


Gorgeous lighting, nonetheless



On 21/08/2013 2:46 AM, Bruce Walker wrote:

Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look ...

http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
rearranging the whole thing).

I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
stands.

K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

Comments welcome!




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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-27 Thread Bruce Walker
Hey, thanks Derby! Intimate is what I'm going for. I wasn't setup for
the full high-key Hurley look though; next time. I do love Hurley's
work.

I agree with complaints about the fingers. The pose was dictating the
framing but I was set on tight, so I compromised. When I retry that I
will re-pose or re-frame rather than crop fingers. I have some other,
looser, shots I will work on but none with that expression I so liked.


On Tue, Aug 27, 2013 at 7:27 AM, Derby Chang der...@iinet.net.au wrote:

 Just saw this. I like the current style of cropping the top of the head.
 Peter Hurley-esque. It makes the portrait intimate, I think. Not too sure
 about the crop on the fingers though

 Gorgeous lighting, nonetheless




 On 21/08/2013 2:46 AM, Bruce Walker wrote:

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look
 ...

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-27 Thread Darren Addy
Nice example of butterfly lighting. Love the big catch-lights in her eyes.

Nits to pick?
Although there isn't really a low shoulder, this strikes me as a
masculine head tilt. (At least I would say it is not a feminine one).

Hands are difficult. Normally if you break the wrist the
hands/fingers will assume a more feminine look. To achieve that, for
naturalness sake, that would probably mean that her top hand would be
on her bicep, not her forearm.

Couple of links for hands:
http://www.joeedelman.com/blog/modeling/how-to-handle-hands/
http://www.joeedelman.com/blog/modeling/how-to-handle-hands-part-2/1668/

On Tue, Aug 27, 2013 at 1:45 PM, Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com wrote:
 Hey, thanks Derby! Intimate is what I'm going for. I wasn't setup for
 the full high-key Hurley look though; next time. I do love Hurley's
 work.

 I agree with complaints about the fingers. The pose was dictating the
 framing but I was set on tight, so I compromised. When I retry that I
 will re-pose or re-frame rather than crop fingers. I have some other,
 looser, shots I will work on but none with that expression I so liked.


 On Tue, Aug 27, 2013 at 7:27 AM, Derby Chang der...@iinet.net.au wrote:

 Just saw this. I like the current style of cropping the top of the head.
 Peter Hurley-esque. It makes the portrait intimate, I think. Not too sure
 about the crop on the fingers though

 Gorgeous lighting, nonetheless




 On 21/08/2013 2:46 AM, Bruce Walker wrote:

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look
 ...

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

 Comments welcome!



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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-27 Thread Bruce Walker
In this particular pose I was setting up a classic triangle, head at
the apex. I tried posing her head tilted toward both sides and this
one created the best lines -- to my eye anyway.

Interestingly, Clay Blackmore suggests avoiding the feminine pose with
young girls (Sophie is just 16). I figure he's steering us away from
over glamourizing them like those ultra creepy beauty contest images.

I did try adjusting her hands alternatively; haven't got to those
shots yet. I did break her wrists in this shot: both hands curve
gently down at the wrist.

Thank you, Darren!


On Tue, Aug 27, 2013 at 3:04 PM, Darren Addy pixelsmi...@gmail.com wrote:
 Nice example of butterfly lighting. Love the big catch-lights in her eyes.

 Nits to pick?
 Although there isn't really a low shoulder, this strikes me as a
 masculine head tilt. (At least I would say it is not a feminine one).

 Hands are difficult. Normally if you break the wrist the
 hands/fingers will assume a more feminine look. To achieve that, for
 naturalness sake, that would probably mean that her top hand would be
 on her bicep, not her forearm.

 Couple of links for hands:
 http://www.joeedelman.com/blog/modeling/how-to-handle-hands/
 http://www.joeedelman.com/blog/modeling/how-to-handle-hands-part-2/1668/

 On Tue, Aug 27, 2013 at 1:45 PM, Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com wrote:
 Hey, thanks Derby! Intimate is what I'm going for. I wasn't setup for
 the full high-key Hurley look though; next time. I do love Hurley's
 work.

 I agree with complaints about the fingers. The pose was dictating the
 framing but I was set on tight, so I compromised. When I retry that I
 will re-pose or re-frame rather than crop fingers. I have some other,
 looser, shots I will work on but none with that expression I so liked.


 On Tue, Aug 27, 2013 at 7:27 AM, Derby Chang der...@iinet.net.au wrote:

 Just saw this. I like the current style of cropping the top of the head.
 Peter Hurley-esque. It makes the portrait intimate, I think. Not too sure
 about the crop on the fingers though

 Gorgeous lighting, nonetheless




 On 21/08/2013 2:46 AM, Bruce Walker wrote:

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look
 ...

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

 Comments welcome!



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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-21 Thread mike wilson
On 21/08/2013, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote:
 Much better without the wrinkles. The nails are still blue, though.

 Rick

 http://photo.net/photos/RickW

Phew!  I thought I was in serious eye-failure mode.



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 Sent: Tuesday, August 20, 2013 12:46 PM
 Subject: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look
 ...

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.


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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-21 Thread Bruce Walker
Thanks, Rick.

The nails are green though. Download the 1600px version of that shot,
use the Photoshop eyedropper in the center of the largest nail (5x5
sampling) and I get this ...

RGB: 5, 77, 47

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/2254722/PDML/FingerNailColour.jpg

Very green. :-)


On Tue, Aug 20, 2013 at 9:22 PM, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote:
 Much better without the wrinkles. The nails are still blue, though.

 Rick

 http://photo.net/photos/RickW


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 Sent: Tuesday, August 20, 2013 12:46 PM
 Subject: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look ...

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

 Comments welcome!

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-21 Thread Bruce Walker
Don't count your chickens, Mike. :-)

Thanks for looking!

On Wed, Aug 21, 2013 at 2:57 AM, mike wilson m.9.wil...@ntlworld.com wrote:
 On 21/08/2013, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote:
 Much better without the wrinkles. The nails are still blue, though.

 Rick

 http://photo.net/photos/RickW

 Phew!  I thought I was in serious eye-failure mode.



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 To: Pentax Discuss Mailing List PDML@pdml.net
 Cc:
 Sent: Tuesday, August 20, 2013 12:46 PM
 Subject: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look
 ...

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.


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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-21 Thread Bruce Walker
Thank you, Frank.

On Tue, Aug 20, 2013 at 11:01 PM, knarf knarftheria...@gmail.com wrote:
 Lovely portrait.

 Cheers,
 frank

 Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote:
Much better without the wrinkles. The nails are still blue, though.

Rick

http://photo.net/photos/RickW


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To: Pentax Discuss Mailing List PDML@pdml.net
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Sent: Tuesday, August 20, 2013 12:46 PM
Subject: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another
look ...

http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
rearranging the whole thing).

I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
stands.

K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

Comments welcome!

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-21 Thread John

FWIW, on my newly calibrated monitor they appear to be more green than blue.

On 8/21/2013 2:57 AM, mike wilson wrote:

On 21/08/2013, Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote:

Much better without the wrinkles. The nails are still blue, though.

Rick

http://photo.net/photos/RickW


Phew!  I thought I was in serious eye-failure mode.




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From: Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com
To: Pentax Discuss Mailing List PDML@pdml.net
Cc:
Sent: Tuesday, August 20, 2013 12:46 PM
Subject: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look
...

http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
rearranging the whole thing).

I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
stands.

K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.





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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-21 Thread P.J. Alling

They match her eyes, No wait...

On 8/20/2013 9:22 PM, Rick Womer wrote:

Much better without the wrinkles. The nails are still blue, though.

Rick
  
http://photo.net/photos/RickW



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From: Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com
To: Pentax Discuss Mailing List PDML@pdml.net
Cc:
Sent: Tuesday, August 20, 2013 12:46 PM
Subject: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look ...

http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
rearranging the whole thing).

I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
stands.

K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

Comments welcome!




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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-20 Thread Bruce Walker
Thanks Larry.

The muted, low contrast colour scheme was a conscious decision to draw
attention to the face. It's a style thing.

I was disappointed to see that the cheap new muslin backdrop didn't
wrinkle up overnight. :-) I crammed it into its bag, squished all the
air out, but no luck. So it's back in there now and I'm hoping that
after a few days or weeks it will wrinkle, dammit.

Yeah, background was way lighter than I wanted. But it was a small
(though cozy) living/dining room area with light coloured walls and
ceilings. I was out of stands at that point so gobos had to be
handheld or foregone.

I'll PP the wrinkles out in future.


On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 9:33 PM, Larry Colen l...@red4est.com wrote:
 On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 08:59:34PM -0400, Bruce Walker wrote:
 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 That sounds a lot like something I've done.


 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

 Comments welcome!

 The lighting is damn near perfect.

 There are a few things that I think you might have done differently,
 advice that is worth approximately what it's costing you.

 1) The dark green shirt is too close in color to the grey background.
 I think that a red, or maroon sweater would have worked a lot better.
 Alternatively, maybe some rim lighting would have set it off.

 2) I find the creases on the backdrop distracting.  The ideal situation
 would involve a room two or three times the size of the one you had,
 where you could move the backdrop far enough away that it would have
 been either totally out of focus, unlit, or both.
 Alternatively, if there is any way you could have used gobos to keep
 most of the light off the backdrop and just hit it with a spot
 behind Sophie, to add contrast, then you'd only need a small unwrinkled
 area of background. That could have also set off the sweater.

 To prevent the distracting creases like those, I do one of two things.
 I will either store a backdrop rolled up on a 10' section of ABS
 so that it is smooth, and has no creases.  Or I will store it wadded up
 in a bin, so that it is covered by random wrinkles, with no distracting
 patterns.

 Although, what I usually really do is just make sure that my lights
 are much closer to my model than the background, and ideally not even
 hitting the backgound, because if you can't see the backdrop, then you
 can't see the creases.


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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-20 Thread Bruce Walker
Thank you Stan. Glad you like the colour scheme.

Yeah, that blue nail polish. :-) The focus was headshots, but of
course hands inevitably come into it and I hadn't noticed. Yet another
take-away lesson. In many other shots she's wearing colourful clothing
and the polish fits in (youthful, bright).

I have also rendered this as a bw and the nail polish is moot there.
I'll post one of those when I get to one I really like.


On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 10:02 PM, Stan Halpin
s...@stans-photography.info wrote:
 I like the (apparent?) color of the backdrop because of the way it matches 
 the color of the sweater. Which means the whole context, backdrop plus 
 sweater, pulls my eye to the face (which is lovely!) Or it would if it 
 weren't for the distraction of the wrinkles Larry pointed out. I have a white 
 sheet I've used as a backdrop for product shots for eBay sales. I hate 
 wrinkles. But I hate ironing even more.

 The bright nail polish also distracts a bit from her face. With such a lovely 
 well-lit subject, why let other elements draw attention away?

 Disclaimer: I don't know how to shoot studio portraits, but I have had 
 several passport and driver's license photos taken of me over the years.

 stan

 On Aug 19, 2013, at 9:33 PM, Larry Colen wrote:

 On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 08:59:34PM -0400, Bruce Walker wrote:
 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 That sounds a lot like something I've done.


 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

 Comments welcome!

 The lighting is damn near perfect.

 There are a few things that I think you might have done differently,
 advice that is worth approximately what it's costing you.

 1) The dark green shirt is too close in color to the grey background.
 I think that a red, or maroon sweater would have worked a lot better.
 Alternatively, maybe some rim lighting would have set it off.

 2) I find the creases on the backdrop distracting.  The ideal situation
 would involve a room two or three times the size of the one you had,
 where you could move the backdrop far enough away that it would have
 been either totally out of focus, unlit, or both.
 Alternatively, if there is any way you could have used gobos to keep
 most of the light off the backdrop and just hit it with a spot
 behind Sophie, to add contrast, then you'd only need a small unwrinkled
 area of background. That could have also set off the sweater.

 To prevent the distracting creases like those, I do one of two things.
 I will either store a backdrop rolled up on a 10' section of ABS
 so that it is smooth, and has no creases.  Or I will store it wadded up
 in a bin, so that it is covered by random wrinkles, with no distracting
 patterns.

 Although, what I usually really do is just make sure that my lights
 are much closer to my model than the background, and ideally not even
 hitting the backgound, because if you can't see the backdrop, then you
 can't see the creases.


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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-20 Thread Bruce Walker
Thanks, Igor.

Cutting off heads is a bit of a fashion, somewhat popularized by film
and TV and largely necessitated by the landscape orientation. An
overriding principle is to keep the eyes in the upper one third of the
frame, and the closer you frame the more head is going to get cut off.
And too, when the background is crappy I automatically frame closer to
exclude it.

I have many other variations of this one, some with no head cropping,
but I particularly liked her expression in this one. I generally
prefer smiles so you'll get your wish shortly. :-)


On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 11:27 PM, Igor Roshchin s...@komkon.org wrote:

 Bruce,

 This portrait is even better than the previous, especially light-wise.
 I like the light, and I didn't even notice the creases until read
 Larry's comments. The blue nail polish didn't distract me.

 But, from the very first look, I have been distracted by the top of the
 head cut off.
 Also, the two fingers on the left hand would've been better inside
 the frame..
 (I remember, there was a nice website showing what is OK and not OK with
 respect to cutting off people in photographs, - primarily limbs).

 Sorry, the chopped-off head still bothers me. - The head should be
 complete, or a more drastic cut has to happen...

 Best,

 Igor




 On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 08:59:34PM -0400, Bruce Walker wrote:
 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh


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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-20 Thread George Sinos
I really like the lighting Bruce.

It looks like you could also do a vertical format crop on her face and
get a nice tight head shot from of this same image.

gs
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On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 7:59 PM, Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com wrote:
 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-20 Thread Bruce Walker
Thank you very much, George.

Yes, I agree, I'll try a couple of tight crops too. I want to invest
in one of those brackets that lets you quickly flip between landscape
and portrait without shifting horizontally as happens with my tripod
ball head. I'd have done more portrait orientations but for that. I
was mainly concentrating on other aspects like posing, direction,
subtle light refinements.


On Tue, Aug 20, 2013 at 9:03 AM, George Sinos gsi...@gmail.com wrote:
 I really like the lighting Bruce.

 It looks like you could also do a vertical format crop on her face and
 get a nice tight head shot from of this same image.

 gs
 George Sinos
 
 www.GeorgesPhotos.net
 www.GeorgeSinos.com


 On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 7:59 PM, Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com wrote:
 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

 Comments welcome!

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-20 Thread John
I find the background distracting. My eye keeps being drawn to that 
vertical fold.


It would help if the background were either (A) ironed; (B) wadded up 
several times so that the wrinkles become completely randomized or (C) 
out of focus.


C seems to work best, but B will do in a pinch.

On 8/19/2013 8:59 PM, Bruce Walker wrote:

A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
rearranging the whole thing).

http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
stands.

K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-20 Thread Bruce Walker
Thank you, Don.


On Tue, Aug 20, 2013 at 11:38 AM, Don Guthrie shark50...@gmail.com wrote:
 FWIW I agree with Larry about the wrinkled backdrop. The Shirt color doesn't
 bother me and I know nothing about studio lighting but I think her face
 stands out nicely, pose and expression great overall effective shot.

 pdml-requ...@pdml.net wrote:

 Message: 11 Date: Mon, 19 Aug 2013 18:33:27 -0700 From: Larry Colen
 l...@red4est.com To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net Subject:
 Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie Message-ID:
 20130820013327.ga29...@platypus.gruk.net Content-Type: text/plain;
 charset=us-ascii On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 08:59:34PM -0400, Bruce Walker

 wrote:

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).
 
 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh
 
 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 That sounds a lot like something I've done.

 

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture
 
 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.
 
 Comments welcome!

 The lighting is damn near perfect.


 There are a few things that I think you might have done differently,
 advice that is worth approximately what it's costing you.

 1) The dark green shirt is too close in color to the grey background.
 I think that a red, or maroon sweater would have worked a lot better.
 Alternatively, maybe some rim lighting would have set it off.

 2) I find the creases on the backdrop distracting.  The ideal situation
 would involve a room two or three times the size of the one you had,
 where you could move the backdrop far enough away that it would have
 been either totally out of focus, unlit, or both.
 Alternatively, if there is any way you could have used gobos to keep
 most of the light off the backdrop and just hit it with a spot
 behind Sophie, to add contrast, then you'd only need a small unwrinkled
 area of background. That could have also set off the sweater.

 To prevent the distracting creases like those, I do one of two things.
 I will either store a backdrop rolled up on a 10' section of ABS
 so that it is smooth, and has no creases.  Or I will store it wadded up
 in a bin, so that it is covered by random wrinkles, with no distracting
 patterns.

 Although, what I usually really do is just make sure that my lights
 are much closer to my model than the background, and ideally not even
 hitting the backgound, because if you can't see the backdrop, then you
 can't see the creases.

 
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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-20 Thread Bruce Walker
Yeah, yeah, I'm getting the message, loud and clear: lose the wrinkles! :-)

I'm a guy, so A is _not_ happening. I let the backdrop hang all the
prior day and the wrinkles held. 'Course it was folded in its package
for who knows how long before I opened it. I might try my travel
steamer to see if it helps. I doubt it will though; never helped my
clothing. :-(

I tried B: I scrunched it back into its bag, wadded as tight as it
would go, and left it overnight. You'd think it would get seriously
wrinkly, but no dammit.

C I tried to do, but lack of enough linear distance de-feet-ed me.

Backdrop tech is more involved than I hoped for. I really don't want
to carry around a roll of seamless, but it may come to that.

Thanks for your comments, John.


On Tue, Aug 20, 2013 at 11:15 AM, John johnsess...@yahoo.com wrote:
 I find the background distracting. My eye keeps being drawn to that vertical
 fold.

 It would help if the background were either (A) ironed; (B) wadded up
 several times so that the wrinkles become completely randomized or (C) out
 of focus.

 C seems to work best, but B will do in a pinch.


 On 8/19/2013 8:59 PM, Bruce Walker wrote:

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

 Comments welcome!


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PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-20 Thread Bruce Walker
Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look ...

http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
rearranging the whole thing).

I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
stands.

K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

Comments welcome!

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-20 Thread Igor Roshchin

Bruce,

You pulled out her blue nails just for this photo?
Man, you are a sadist! ;-)

But I guess, with the top of the head chopped off, that probably doesn't
hurt any more.  ;-)


On a serious note, - let me clarify my comment (after reading your
response in the previous thread). - 
Yes, I know about that trend of cutting of a portion of the head. 
I even do that myself occasionally
(see my photo in the 2012 PDML annual :
http://www.blurb.com/books/3382929-pdml-photo-annual-2012/pages/52#basic
).
My point was that it works if you make a more close-up shot, e.g. 
when it is head-only, or maybe in some cases head-and-shoulders. 
But when you include as much as hands, - the chopped off head does not
work (for me).
BTW, the 2/3 rule that you mentioned is not followed in this portrait.

Again, sorry if it appears as too much of criticism. I didn't mean to
attack you. I just like the photo otherwise.

Also, - just a thought for your wrinkle problem:
If you let it hang for a while, you may want to sprinkle some water from
a windex-type spray bottle. Or, better yet, try a wrinkle-releaser:
http://www.amazon.com/Downy-Wrinkle-Releaser-16-9/dp/B00377G10Q/
(you can buy it at a walmart you grocery supermarket or pharmacy store).
Depending on the fabric, it might work better than just plain water.

Cheers,

Igor



Tue Aug 20 12:46:16 EDT 2013
Bruce Walker wrote:

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look ...
 
 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-20 Thread Bruce Walker
On Tue, Aug 20, 2013 at 3:29 PM, Igor Roshchin s...@komkon.org wrote:

 BTW, the 2/3 rule that you mentioned is not followed in this portrait.

Hmmm. According to Lightroom's crop overlay, her eyes lie well into
the upper third of this image. Would you like to see a screen grab?
:-) Perhaps you thought I meant one should follow the Rule of Thirds
and get the eyes on the line? That's not what I meant.

And good heavens no, I don't misunderstand your comments. You're
expressing your aesthetic preference, which is quite a fair one. How
can feel attacked by that?  BTW, head-cropping is also intentionally
done to flatter bald or follicly challenged men's portraits. Quite a
handy subterfuge.

The Care and Handling sheet that came with the muslin suggests using a
travel steamer on the wrinkles but taking care _not_ to saturate the
fabric. So I'm note sure about the water idea, but I like your Downy
wrinkle-releaser suggestion. That sounds like it's worth a try.

Thank you for your thoughts and suggestions, Igor!


On Tue, Aug 20, 2013 at 3:29 PM, Igor Roshchin s...@komkon.org wrote:

 Bruce,

 You pulled out her blue nails just for this photo?
 Man, you are a sadist! ;-)

 But I guess, with the top of the head chopped off, that probably doesn't
 hurt any more.  ;-)


 On a serious note, - let me clarify my comment (after reading your
 response in the previous thread). -
 Yes, I know about that trend of cutting of a portion of the head.
 I even do that myself occasionally
 (see my photo in the 2012 PDML annual :
 http://www.blurb.com/books/3382929-pdml-photo-annual-2012/pages/52#basic
 ).
 My point was that it works if you make a more close-up shot, e.g.
 when it is head-only, or maybe in some cases head-and-shoulders.
 But when you include as much as hands, - the chopped off head does not
 work (for me).
 BTW, the 2/3 rule that you mentioned is not followed in this portrait.

 Again, sorry if it appears as too much of criticism. I didn't mean to
 attack you. I just like the photo otherwise.

 Also, - just a thought for your wrinkle problem:
 If you let it hang for a while, you may want to sprinkle some water from
 a windex-type spray bottle. Or, better yet, try a wrinkle-releaser:
 http://www.amazon.com/Downy-Wrinkle-Releaser-16-9/dp/B00377G10Q/
 (you can buy it at a walmart you grocery supermarket or pharmacy store).
 Depending on the fabric, it might work better than just plain water.

 Cheers,

 Igor



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 Bruce Walker wrote:

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look 
 ...

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-20 Thread Paul Stenquist
Pretty lady. Always a good thing. Well done.
Paul
On Aug 20, 2013, at 12:46 PM, Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com wrote:

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look ...
 
 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh
 
 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).
 
 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.
 
 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture
 
 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.
 
 Comments welcome!
 
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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-20 Thread Larry Colen
On Tue, Aug 20, 2013 at 03:29:34PM -0400, Igor Roshchin wrote:
 Also, - just a thought for your wrinkle problem:
 If you let it hang for a while, you may want to sprinkle some water from
 a windex-type spray bottle. Or, better yet, try a wrinkle-releaser:
 http://www.amazon.com/Downy-Wrinkle-Releaser-16-9/dp/B00377G10Q/
 (you can buy it at a walmart you grocery supermarket or pharmacy store).
 Depending on the fabric, it might work better than just plain water.

Or maybe just toss it in a clothes dryer long enough to get it warm,
then either hang it to get the wrinkles out, or wad it up to put 
more artistic wrinkles in.


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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-20 Thread Bruce Walker
Thanks, Paul.

On Tue, Aug 20, 2013 at 4:50 PM, Paul Stenquist pnstenqu...@comcast.net wrote:
 Pretty lady. Always a good thing. Well done.
 Paul
 On Aug 20, 2013, at 12:46 PM, Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com wrote:

 Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look 
 ...

 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).

 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

 Comments welcome!

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-20 Thread Rick Womer
Much better without the wrinkles. The nails are still blue, though.

Rick
 
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Sent: Tuesday, August 20, 2013 12:46 PM
Subject: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another look ...

http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
rearranging the whole thing).

I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
stands.

K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

Comments welcome!

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

2013-08-20 Thread knarf
Lovely portrait.

Cheers, 
frank

Rick Womer rwomer1...@yahoo.com wrote:
Much better without the wrinkles. The nails are still blue, though.

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From: Bruce Walker bruce.wal...@gmail.com
To: Pentax Discuss Mailing List PDML@pdml.net
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Sent: Tuesday, August 20, 2013 12:46 PM
Subject: PESO Portrait of Sophie [now with dewrinkled backdrop]

Background wrinkles rankle, as do blue nails. Both gone! Have another
look ...

http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
rearranging the whole thing).

I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
stands.

K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

Comments welcome!

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PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-19 Thread Bruce Walker
A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
rearranging the whole thing).

http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh

I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
stands.

K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture

Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.

Comments welcome!

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-19 Thread Larry Colen
On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 08:59:34PM -0400, Bruce Walker wrote:
 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).
 
 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh
 
 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.

That sounds a lot like something I've done.

 
 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture
 
 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.
 
 Comments welcome!

The lighting is damn near perfect. 

There are a few things that I think you might have done differently,
advice that is worth approximately what it's costing you.

1) The dark green shirt is too close in color to the grey background.
I think that a red, or maroon sweater would have worked a lot better.
Alternatively, maybe some rim lighting would have set it off.

2) I find the creases on the backdrop distracting.  The ideal situation
would involve a room two or three times the size of the one you had, 
where you could move the backdrop far enough away that it would have 
been either totally out of focus, unlit, or both.  
Alternatively, if there is any way you could have used gobos to keep
most of the light off the backdrop and just hit it with a spot
behind Sophie, to add contrast, then you'd only need a small unwrinkled
area of background. That could have also set off the sweater. 

To prevent the distracting creases like those, I do one of two things.
I will either store a backdrop rolled up on a 10' section of ABS
so that it is smooth, and has no creases.  Or I will store it wadded up
in a bin, so that it is covered by random wrinkles, with no distracting 
patterns. 

Although, what I usually really do is just make sure that my lights
are much closer to my model than the background, and ideally not even 
hitting the backgound, because if you can't see the backdrop, then you 
can't see the creases.

 
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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-19 Thread Stan Halpin
I like the (apparent?) color of the backdrop because of the way it matches the 
color of the sweater. Which means the whole context, backdrop plus sweater, 
pulls my eye to the face (which is lovely!) Or it would if it weren't for the 
distraction of the wrinkles Larry pointed out. I have a white sheet I've used 
as a backdrop for product shots for eBay sales. I hate wrinkles. But I hate 
ironing even more.

The bright nail polish also distracts a bit from her face. With such a lovely 
well-lit subject, why let other elements draw attention away?

Disclaimer: I don't know how to shoot studio portraits, but I have had several 
passport and driver's license photos taken of me over the years.

stan

On Aug 19, 2013, at 9:33 PM, Larry Colen wrote:

 On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 08:59:34PM -0400, Bruce Walker wrote:
 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).
 
 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh
 
 I was also testing my latest money-saving invention: $10 IKEA
 background support system. Ingredients: One Hugad black curtain rod,
 210-385 cm; 2x Betydlig curtain rod brackets, top-slot filed out to
 fit 1/4 stud on top of light stand; use with two cheap 8' light
 stands.
 
 That sounds a lot like something I've done.
 
 
 K20D, DA* 50-135/2.8 @ 90mm/f:5, 1/160th, ISO 100;
 Lr + Ps + Nik + Portraiture
 
 Paramount short lighting with reflector fill. AF540FGZ in Westcott
 Medium Apollo above-left, key; AF540FGZ in 30 umbrella softbox,
 boomed above behind-right, hair; 42 silver reflector, right.
 
 Comments welcome!
 
 The lighting is damn near perfect. 
 
 There are a few things that I think you might have done differently,
 advice that is worth approximately what it's costing you.
 
 1) The dark green shirt is too close in color to the grey background.
 I think that a red, or maroon sweater would have worked a lot better.
 Alternatively, maybe some rim lighting would have set it off.
 
 2) I find the creases on the backdrop distracting.  The ideal situation
 would involve a room two or three times the size of the one you had, 
 where you could move the backdrop far enough away that it would have 
 been either totally out of focus, unlit, or both.  
 Alternatively, if there is any way you could have used gobos to keep
 most of the light off the backdrop and just hit it with a spot
 behind Sophie, to add contrast, then you'd only need a small unwrinkled
 area of background. That could have also set off the sweater. 
 
 To prevent the distracting creases like those, I do one of two things.
 I will either store a backdrop rolled up on a 10' section of ABS
 so that it is smooth, and has no creases.  Or I will store it wadded up
 in a bin, so that it is covered by random wrinkles, with no distracting 
 patterns. 
 
 Although, what I usually really do is just make sure that my lights
 are much closer to my model than the background, and ideally not even 
 hitting the backgound, because if you can't see the backdrop, then you 
 can't see the creases.
 
 
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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-19 Thread Larry Colen
On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 10:02:48PM -0400, Stan Halpin wrote:
 Disclaimer: I don't know how to shoot studio portraits, but I have had 
 several passport and driver's license photos taken of me over the years.

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Re: PESO Portrait of Sophie

2013-08-19 Thread Igor Roshchin

Bruce,

This portrait is even better than the previous, especially light-wise.
I like the light, and I didn't even notice the creases until read
Larry's comments. The blue nail polish didn't distract me.

But, from the very first look, I have been distracted by the top of the
head cut off.
Also, the two fingers on the left hand would've been better inside
the frame.. 
(I remember, there was a nice website showing what is OK and not OK with
respect to cutting off people in photographs, - primarily limbs).

Sorry, the chopped-off head still bothers me. - The head should be 
complete, or a more drastic cut has to happen...

Best,

Igor




On Mon, Aug 19, 2013 at 08:59:34PM -0400, Bruce Walker wrote:
 A straight-forward studio portrait of my niece, Sophie. Shot on
 location in my sister's living room (she's a champ to put up with me
 rearranging the whole thing).
 
 http://flic.kr/p/fy42fh
 

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