[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-channel-12

2014-10-30 Thread Vijay K. Gurbani
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-channel-12

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-manet-ibs-03

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
We should add Thomas Clause (the shepherd) into this thread as well. (Unfortunately, .all doesn’t reach shepherds if they are not WG chairs, as is the case sometimes.) Jari On 29 Oct 2014, at 20:47, Martin Thomson martin.thom...@gmail.com wrote: On 29 October 2014 03:52, Dearlove,

[Gen-art] .all and non-wg-chair shepherds

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
We recently had a case where a document shepherd did not receive a review, because he didn’t happen to be one of the WG chairs. Gen-ART reviewers tend to send their reviews to draft-foo.all address. Shepherd names are available in the tracker, but we do not normally dig them up.. because

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm-14

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
I am looking at this draft in order to fill in my recommendations for tonight’s IESG telechat. Ben, thank you for your review which pointed out worries (and I agreed with those), and thank you Kevin for the responses (which made sense to me). However, in addition to the major/minor issue

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-ip-pw-capability-07

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Roni. Jari On 06 May 2014, at 08:52, Roni Even ron.even@gmail.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments

Re: [Gen-art] Second last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sip-bench-meth

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Tom. Was there an answer to the questions or edits? Jari On 03 Oct 2014, at 04:12, Tom Taylor tom.taylor.s...@gmail.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-channel-12

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Vijay. Authors/shepherds, do you have any responses to Vijay’s question below? Jari On 29 Oct 2014, at 22:15, Vijay K. Gurbani v...@bell-labs.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08.txt

2014-10-30 Thread Alexey Melnikov
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08.txt

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-08.txt

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review, Alexey. (I was just searching for the review two minutes ago, when this came in :-) Jari On 30 Oct 2014, at 13:05, Alexey Melnikov alexey.melni...@isode.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-manet-ibs-03

2014-10-30 Thread Thomas Clausen
On 30 Oct 2014, at 09:24, Jari Arkko jari.ar...@piuha.net wrote: We should add Thomas Clause (the shepherd) into this thread as well. Fabulous, thank you Jari. I will read up on this, try to understand the proxy-DISCUSS raised by Adrian. (Unfortunately, .all doesn’t reach shepherds if

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-channel-12

2014-10-30 Thread Michael Tuexen
On 30 Oct 2014, at 12:02, Jari Arkko jari.ar...@piuha.net wrote: Thanks for the review, Vijay. Authors/shepherds, do you have any responses to Vijay’s question below? Jari On 29 Oct 2014, at 22:15, Vijay K. Gurbani v...@bell-labs.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-query-16

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks. On 27 Oct 2014, at 21:44, Brian E Carpenter brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please wait for direction from your document

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-ietf-weirds-json-response-10

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks. On 20 Oct 2014, at 16:12, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) droma...@avaya.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any

Re: [Gen-art] Second last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sip-bench-meth

2014-10-30 Thread Vijay K. Gurbani
On 10/30/2014 04:29 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: Thanks for the review, Tom. Was there an answer to the questions or edits? Jari: I have not got back to Tom regarding the edits yet as I was waiting for IESG review to be done. I was planning to then attend to both the Gen-ART and IESG comments on the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm-14

2014-10-30 Thread Igoe, Kevin M.
This is probably my fault. I didn't think it was wise to submit a new version of the I-D until all of the comments corrections had been collected. I didn't want folks trying to review a moving target, especially since a change in paragraph A might affect the interpretation of paragraph B.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-dmm-best-practices-gap-analysis-07

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review(s) Elwyn! Much appreciated. (Authors, have you seen the remaining nits list below?) Jari On 14 Oct 2014, at 22:26, Elwyn Davies elw...@dial.pipex.com wrote: Hi, Anthony. These changes look good. I have run through all the changes in -08 and there are (IMO) a

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-channel-12

2014-10-30 Thread Vijay K. Gurbani
On 10/30/2014 07:15 AM, Michael Tuexen wrote: Right. However, we wanted to make sure that there is no assumption on the number of concurrent RTP flows. There are scenarios where you will have no concurrent flow, scenarios where you have some, but they are inactive, and also scenarios where you

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-dart-dscp-rtp-07

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Robert - thank you very much for the review. And thanks David for taking the suggestions into account. I have balloted no-objection for this draft in today’s IESG telechat. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Suresh. Authors, can you take Suresh’s comments into account? Thanks. Jari On 29 Oct 2014, at 06:11, Suresh Krishnan suresh.krish...@ericsson.com wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART,

Re: [Gen-art] Genart Telechat review: draft-ietf-6man-why64-06

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review(s), Robert. Jari On 14 Oct 2014, at 19:44, Robert Sparks rjspa...@nostrum.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please wait for

Re: [Gen-art] Second last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sip-bench-meth

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Ok. Thanks. Jari On 30 Oct 2014, at 14:31, Vijay K. Gurbani v...@bell-labs.com wrote: On 10/30/2014 04:29 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: Thanks for the review, Tom. Was there an answer to the questions or edits? Jari: I have not got back to Tom regarding the edits yet as I was waiting for IESG

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-srtp-aes-gcm-14

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Kevin: This is probably my fault. I didn't think it was wise to submit a new version of the I-D until all of the comments corrections had been collected. I didn't want folks trying to review a moving target, especially since a change in paragraph A might affect the interpretation of

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09.txt

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review, Suresh. Authors, can you take care of the address issue below? Jari On 29 Oct 2014, at 05:31, Suresh Krishnan suresh.krish...@ericsson.com wrote: I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-sec-09

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Christer: Many thanks for your review. Much appreciated. Thank you Scott for addressing things that Christer brought up. I do agree with you though that detailed treatment of WHOIS is out of scope for this document. Jari On 21 Oct 2014, at 18:56, Christer Holmberg

Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-weirds-using-http-13

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review, Joel! Jari On 19 Oct 2014, at 05:22, Joel M. Halpern j...@joelhalpern.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-weirds-object-inventory-05

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review and edits, Ben Ning! Jari On 23 Oct 2014, at 11:59, Ning Kong nk...@cnnic.cn wrote: -- section 4.3, table: What do slashes and parentheses mean in the data? Are they literally in the data, or do they mean something else? In the domain space, all characters in

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-softwire-4rd-08.txt

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Christer, and thanks Remi for volunteering to address these. jari On 06 Oct 2014, at 13:40, Christer Holmberg christer.holmb...@ericsson.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] .all and non-wg-chair shepherds

2014-10-30 Thread Scott Brim
On Thu, Oct 30, 2014 at 4:54 AM, Jari Arkko jari.ar...@piuha.net wrote: We recently had a case where a document shepherd did not receive a review, because he didn’t happen to be one of the WG chairs. Gen-ART reviewers tend to send their reviews to draft-foo.all address. Shepherd names are

Re: [Gen-art] .all and non-wg-chair shepherds

2014-10-30 Thread Black, David
Add shepherds to .all +1, --David From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Scott Brim Sent: Thursday, October 30, 2014 9:49 AM To: Jari Arkko Cc: General Area Review Team Subject: Re: [Gen-art] .all and non-wg-chair shepherds On Thu, Oct 30, 2014 at 4:54 AM, Jari Arkko

Re: [Gen-art] .all and non-wg-chair shepherds

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Robert, can you confirm that we do not currently have shepherds on .all? I’m getting some conflicting data about this, and I’m too busy today to figure out a test case to actually try this out. Jari On 30 Oct 2014, at 15:48, Scott Brim scott.b...@gmail.com wrote: On Thu, Oct 30, 2014 at 4:54

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
(resending in the clear - I’ve had some PGP/SMIME trouble today.) Thanks for the review, Suresh. Authors, can you take Suresh’s comments into account? Thanks. Jari ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org

Re: [Gen-art] .all and non-wg-chair shepherds

2014-10-30 Thread Robert Sparks
No, they aren't typically at the moment, but they should be added soon (during next week if things go right). For those on genart that haven't found it already, you can check what the alias expands to at the moment for any given draft by looking at http://tools.ietf.org/draft/aliases (and a

Re: [Gen-art] .all and non-wg-chair shepherds

2014-10-30 Thread Jari Arkko
Great. Thank you. Jari On 30 Oct 2014, at 16:23, Robert Sparks rjspa...@nostrum.com wrote: No, they aren't typically at the moment, but they should be added soon (during next week if things go right). For those on genart that haven't found it already, you can check what the alias

Re: [Gen-art] Second last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sip-bench-meth

2014-10-30 Thread Tom Taylor
Nothing so far. Tom On 30/10/2014 5:29 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: Thanks for the review, Tom. Was there an answer to the questions or edits? Jari On 03 Oct 2014, at 04:12, Tom Taylor tom.taylor.s...@gmail.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,

Re: [Gen-art] Second last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sip-bench-meth

2014-10-30 Thread Tom Taylor
Do you need pseudo-code for Newton's Method, to see how it works. My experience was that 3-4 iterations would get convergence. Tom On 30/10/2014 8:31 AM, Vijay K. Gurbani wrote: On 10/30/2014 04:29 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: Thanks for the review, Tom. Was there an answer to the questions or

Re: [Gen-art] Second last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-sip-bench-meth

2014-10-30 Thread Vijay K. Gurbani
On 10/30/2014 10:57 AM, Tom Taylor wrote: Do you need pseudo-code for Newton's Method, to see how it works. My experience was that 3-4 iterations would get convergence. Tom: Thanks. I will take a look at the URL you provided. The code should be easy. I will get back to you. Cheers, -

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-security-extension-manual-keying-09.txt

2014-10-30 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Hi Suresh, Jari, I am traveling this week and fully engaged in other activities. We plan to address comments next week. Thanks, Acee On 10/30/14, 3:58 AM, Jari Arkko jari.ar...@piuha.net wrote: Thanks for your review, Suresh. I agree that the two issues from Section 2 should be fixed.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls-15.txt

2014-10-30 Thread Shah, Himanshu
Hi Suresh - Thanks for the comments. I have updated the draft accordingly. /himanshu -Original Message- From: Suresh Krishnan [mailto:suresh.krish...@ericsson.com] Sent: Wednesday, October 29, 2014 12:11 AM To: draft-ietf-l2vpn-ipls@tools.ietf.org; General Area Review Team Subject:

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2014-10-30

2014-10-30 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft - Francis Dupont2014-11-06 draft-ietf-opsawg-mibs-to-ieee80231-01 Joel Halpern 2014-11-10

[Gen-art] Last Calls ending during IETF [A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2014-10-30]

2014-10-30 Thread Brian E Carpenter
It doesn't affect me this time, but I am a bit surprised to see several last calls ending very close to and during the IETF week. I thought there was a policy of avoiding that (e.g. by extending such last calls). Regards Brian On 31/10/2014 09:58, A. Jean Mahoney wrote: Hi all, The

[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-bmwg-bgp-basic-convergence-04.txt

2014-10-30 Thread Joel M. Halpern
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: