Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
Early review requested from the General Area Review team
Summary: The document covers the situation (cock up!) appropriately. It is
essentially ready. I have suggested that some
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Not Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Not Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Not Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Issues
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
current drip-rid-26 address your points?
Note that the question sec 8.1 was addressed by IANA and is reflected
in -26.
Thank you.
Bob
On 5/10/22 21:13, Robert Moskowitz wrote:
On 5/10/22 12:25, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker wrote:
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Apologies... Somewhere my memory has become garbled. You are quite right RFC Editor is relentlessly focused on double quotes. I obviously getting too old for this job.Cheers,ElwynOn 3 May 2021 21:25, Carsten Bormann wrote:On 2021-05-03, at 22:10, Elwyn Davies wrote:
>
> Hi, C
Hi, Carsten.My understanding isRFC editor position: use single quotes for everything. Standard US view apparently.British position (my version): long passages, especially direct speech quotes to be enclosed in double quotes. Odd words and short phrases within sentences use single quotes. Quo
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a new version
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a
It appears that the data tracker has managed to truncate my review. The whole text should have beenI am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General AreaReview Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processedby the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments jus
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Issues
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Not Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
than just an editorial nit.
Regards,
Elwyn
On 07/05/2020 08:53, Peter Psenak wrote:
Hi Elwyn,
please see inline:
On 06/05/2020 16:25, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker wrote:
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Not Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
>Yours,
>Joel
>
>On 8/14/2019 6:42 PM, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker wrote:
>> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF document
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a new
: 06/03/2019 22:55 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org, Christian Hopps ,
draft-ietf-netmod-module-tags@ietf.org, "" ,
net...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [netmod] Genart last call review of
draft-ietf-netmod-module-tags-06 [I covered this in the previous repl
in the s7.1 registry and tags with
prefix ietf: that are not in the s7.2 registry.Regards,Elwyn DaviesSent
from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: Datatracker on behalf of Elwyn Davies
Date: 06/03/2019 00:26 (GMT+00:00) To:
gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-netmod-module
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a new version
I missed one nit in s10:
RFC 5440 currently appears in both s10.1 and s10.2. The entries in s10.2 for
RFC 5440 and RFC 5221 are mixed up.
Regards,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.___
Gen-art mailing list
Gen-art@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/li
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Issues
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a
+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies ,
gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-multihomed-prefix-lfa@ietf.org,
i...@ietf.org, rt...@ietf.org Subject: RE: Genart last call review of
draft-ietf-rtgwg-multihomed-prefix-lfa-07
Hi Elwyn,
Thanks for your detailed review. Your feedback and suggestions were take
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Issues
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a new version
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a
Hi, James.
Thanks for actioning the nits. Version -06 is in prime shape!
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.___
Gen-art mailing list
Gen-art@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
lwyn.
-Original Message-
Elwyn,
Thank you very much for your thorough review.
We addressed all your comments.. see below for more details, with [JORGE].
Thx
Jorge
From: Elwyn Davies
Date: Saturday, April 14, 2018 at 12:59 PM
To: "gen-art at ietf.org"
Cc: "draft-ietf-bess
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Hi.
It has been about 6 weeks since responses to the review were postponed till
after IETF 101 any thoughts yet?
Regards,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: Elwyn Davies
Date: 02/03/2018 12:04 (GMT+00:00) To: Brian E Carpenter
, gen-art@ietf.org Cc
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Thanks Bernie.
I am fine with -13.
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: "Bernie Volz (volz)"
Date: 07/04/2018 14:35 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies ,
Suresh Krishnan Cc: gen-art@ietf.org,
draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis@ietf.org, dh..
ive
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: Suresh Krishnan
Date: 06/04/2018 04:15 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies
Subject: Your Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis
Hi Elwyn,
As I spoke to you during IETF week, the authors of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315
can postpone discussion of the other points until the draft panic
has subsided.
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: Brian E Carpenter
Date: 01/03/2018 02:45 (GMT+01:00) To: Elwyn
Davies , gen-art@ietf.org Cc:
draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane
tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-13.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2016/02/27
IETF LC End Date: 2016/02/26
IESG Telechat date: (if known) -
Summary: Not ready. There are a number of minor issues and a host of nits and
editorial
d the language but they
can be lazy.
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: bruno.decra...@orange.com Date:
16/02/2018 14:00 (GMT+00:00) To: "Acee Lindem (acee)" , Elwyn
Davies Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-backoff-algo@ietf.org,
i...@ietf.org, rt...@ie
Hi.
Thanks forthe quick response.
Some coments in line below (EBD==>).
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: "Acee Lindem (acee)"
Date: 16/02/2018 00:30 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies ,
gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-backoff-algo...
your editorial comments. I must say I'm surprised that
we didn’t catch some of these before. We will adopt most of them. One thing I'm
not clear on is why you believe we should change RECOMMENDED to lowercase in
the deployment recommendations. Unless convinced otherwise, we'll lea
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
:-)
I'll look out for updates.
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: "Bernie Volz (volz)"
Date: 19/01/2018 14:55 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies ,
gen-art@ietf.org Cc: dh...@ietf.org, i...@ietf.org,
draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis@ietf.
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
[This is a Last Call Review, not a telechat review].
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team
(Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF
Chair. Please treat these comments
documents tofind whic is which (or look in the YANG index).
This could be handled by a note to the RFC editor or in Auth48.
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: Qin Wu Date:
12/11/2017 15:23 (GMT+00:00) To: 'Elwyn Davies'
Subject: RE: Post-telec
Hi.
Some remaining comments from the earlier gen-art reviews that perhaps
ought to be addressed plus some additional introduced nits. Apologies
for the long delay - I failed to notice that -16 had been published and
gen-art reviewers don't get new version notifications.
Minor Issues:
Source
so in Section 1 as a
reference.
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: Qin Wu Date:
24/10/2017 08:21 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies ,
gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam@ietf.org,
l...@ietf.org, i...@ietf.org Subject: RE: Genar
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Issues
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a
ailto:lber...@labn.net>>>
> Date: Thursday, October 5, 2017 at 6:41 AM
> To: "ext-vishnupa...@gmail.com
<mailto:ext-vishnupa...@gmail.com>
<mailto:ext-vishnupa...@gmail.com <mailto:ext-vishnupa...@gmail.com>>"
> mailto:vish
Regards,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: Vishnu Pavan Beeram
Date: 28/09/2017 03:48 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org,
draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-te-scaling-rec@ietf.org, ietf ,
t...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Teas] Genart last call review of
draft-iet
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Not Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Hi, Adrian.
OK, it's a fair cop.
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: Adrian Farrel
Date: 04/09/2017 17:59 (GMT+00:00) To: 'Elwyn Davies'
, gen-art@ietf.org Cc:
draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control@ietf.org, i...@ietf.org, t...@ie
-From: Adrian Farrel
Date: 04/09/2017 10:47 (GMT+00:00) To: 'Elwyn Davies'
, gen-art@ietf.org Cc:
draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control@ietf.org, i...@ietf.org, t...@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Teas] Genart telechat review of
draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
Thanks Elwyn,
Clarif
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a new version
this.
Cheers,Elwyn
Sent from Samsung tablet.
Original message From: Christer Holmberg
Date: 23/06/2017 12:45 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn
Davies , gen-art@ietf.org Cc:
draft-ietf-sipcore-content-id@ietf.org, sipc...@ietf.org, i...@ietf.org
Subject: RE: Genart last call review of
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
document shepherd or AD before posting a new
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Almost Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Hi.
I was just reading through the proposed RFC Editor notes for this document. I
think it needs to be more explicit that the 0 < (1st character) < 128 occurs
when it is encoded in UTF-8. Thus:OLD: Recipients that wish to support Unicode
encodings other than UTF-8 can do this using a detection
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Not Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
t from Samsung tablet.
Original message ----From: Christer Holmberg
Date: 25/01/2017 13:40 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn
Davies , gen-art@ietf.org Cc:
draft-ietf-mmusic-4572-update@ietf.org, i...@ietf.org, mmu...@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Review of draft-ietf-mmusic-4572-update-11
Hi Elwyn
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
For more information, please see the FAQ at
<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>;.
Document: draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-sec-threats-03.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2017/01/02
IETF LC End Date: 2016/12/20
IESG Te
ex CM2 8HN.
www.baesystems.com/ai
BAE Systems Applied Intelligence Limited
Registered in England & Wales No: 01337451
Registered Office: Surrey Research Park, Guildford, Surrey, GU2 7YP
From: Elwyn Davies [mailto:elw...@dial.pipex.com]
Sent: 20 December 2016 14:29
To: Dearlove, Christopher
-From: "Dearlove, Christopher (UK)"
Date: 19/12/2016 10:40 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn
Davies , gen-art@ietf.org Cc:
draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-sec-threats@ietf.org, ma...@ietf.org, i...@ietf.org
Subject: RE: Review of draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-sec-threats-03
Elwyn Davies
> s3.2: I do not
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more
see inline for a line-by-line set of responses.
On Oct 20, 2016, at 4:42 PM, Elwyn Davies <mailto:elw...@dial.pipex.com>> wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the I
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rfc4379bis-07.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2016/10/21
IETF LC End Date: 2016/10/18
IESG Telechat date: (if known) -
Summary: Not ready. There is one major issue (already notified to
authors and agreed as an issu
1 - 100 of 576 matches
Mail list logo
