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and the current drip-rid-26 address your points?
Note that the question sec 8.1 was addressed by IANA and is reflected
in -26.
Thank you.
Bob
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Apologies... Somewhere my memory has become garbled. You are quite right RFC Editor is relentlessly focused on double quotes. I obviously getting too old for this job.Cheers,ElwynOn 3 May 2021 21:25, Carsten Bormann wrote:On 2021-05-03, at 22:10, Elwyn Davies wrote:
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Hi, Carsten.My understanding isRFC editor position: use single quotes for everything. Standard US view apparently.British position (my version): long passages, especially direct speech quotes to be enclosed in double quotes. Odd words and short phrases within sentences use single quotes.
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) To: Elwyn Davies
Cc: gen-art@ietf.org, Christian Hopps ,
draft-ietf-netmod-module-tags@ietf.org, "" ,
net...@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [netmod] Genart last call review of
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I missed one nit in s10:
RFC 5440 currently appears in both s10.1 and s10.2. The entries in s10.2 for
RFC 5440 and RFC 5221 are mixed up.
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Hi, James.
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Thank you very much for your thorough review.
We addressed all your comments.. see below for more details, with [JORGE].
Thx
Jorge
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Hi.
It has been about 6 weeks since responses to the review were postponed till
after IETF 101 any thoughts yet?
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Thanks Bernie.
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As I spoke to you d
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for a line-by-line set of responses.
On Oct 20, 2016, at 4:42 PM, Elwyn Davies <elw...@dial.pipex.com
<mailto:elw...@dial.pipex.com>> wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rfc4379bis-07.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2016/10/21
IETF LC End Date: 2016/10/18
IESG Telechat date: (if known) -
Summary: Not ready. There is one major issue (already notified to
authors and agreed as an
see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>;.
Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-05.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2016/10/11
IETF LC End Date: 2016/09/22
IESG Telechat date: 2016/10/13
Summary: Ready. Thanks for fixing the couple of nits fro
That's fine.
Cheers,Elwyn
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Original message From: Christer Holmberg
<christer.holmb...@ericsson.com> Date: 04/10/2016 17:53 (GMT+00:00) To:
Christer Holmberg <christer.holmb...@ericsson.com>, Elwyn Davies
<elw...@dial.pipex.com&
.
Cheers,Elwyn
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Original message From: Elwyn Davies <elw...@dial.pipex.com>
Date: 16/09/2016 23:45 (GMT+00:00) To: Christer Holmberg
<christer.holmb...@ericsson.com> Cc:
draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update@ietf.org, gen-art@ietf.org Subject: RE:
Hi Christer.
Thanks. That's fine.
Cheers,Elwyn
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Original message From: Christer Holmberg
<christer.holmb...@ericsson.com> Date: 16/09/2016 22:40 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn
Davies <elw...@dial.pipex.com> Cc: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update.
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>;.
Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2016/09/15
IETF LC End Date: 2016/09/22
IESG Telechat date: (if known) -
Summary: Ready (apart from a tiny bit of pedantry).
Major issues:None
Minor issues:
Non
to it, it is then in 'canonical form' as a
reference target in a standards track document.
'Nuff said.
Cheers,Elwyn
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Original message From: Ben Campbell <b...@nostrum.com> Date:
17/08/2016 23:26 (GMT+00:00) To: Elwyn Davies <elw...@folly.org.uk>
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