[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-capacity-insights-extensions-06

2024-06-17 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08

2024-04-26 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-header-protection-20

2024-04-12 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-dhcp-pd-per-device-07

2024-03-06 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-area-proxy-10

2023-12-26 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting-06

2023-11-05 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-pam-06

2023-10-18 Thread Peter Yee
dering my review comments. My responses to specific points are found below. Kind regards, -Peter From: Greg Mirsky Sent: Wednesday, October 11, 2023 1:54 AM To: Peter Yee Cc: gen-art ; draft-ietf-ippm-pam@ietf.org; IETF IPPM

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-pam-06

2023-10-09 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-target-attr-05

2023-08-08 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution-05

2023-06-20 Thread Peter Yee
We just published a new version (-06) that should address your review. Thanks, Justin On 6/7/23 18:50, Peter Yee via Datatracker wrote: > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution-05

2023-06-07 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-client-cert-field-04

2023-02-24 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp-06

2022-12-15 Thread Peter Yee
Thanks for the quick response, Martin. I agree with all of your points below. I appreciate your considering my belated input. -Peter -Original Message- From: Martin Thomson Sent: Thursday, December 15, 2022 10:07 PM To: Peter Yee ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-ohai

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp-06

2022-12-15 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-11

2022-09-20 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-add-svcb-dns-06

2022-07-08 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12

2022-05-28 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-12

2022-04-06 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-ao-test-vectors-05

2022-01-30 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-eastlake-rfc6931bis-xmlsec-uris-19

2021-12-14 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-jmap-smime-09

2021-10-17 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-smime-07

2021-09-07 Thread Peter Yee
. Kind regards, -Peter From: Bron Gondwana Sent: Tuesday, September 07, 2021 5:10 AM To: Peter Yee ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-jmap-smime@ietf.org; j...@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-smime-07

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-smime-07

2021-09-07 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-16

2021-07-11 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14

2021-05-07 Thread Peter Yee
Responses prefixed with [PEY] below. Kind regards, -Peter -Original Message- From: Gunnar Hellström [mailto:gunnar.hellst...@ghaccess.se] Sent: Friday, May 07, 2021 11:36 AM To: Peter Yee; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: a...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14

2021-05-07 Thread Peter Yee
Thanks for the quick response, Gunnar. I've prefaced my replies below with [PEY]. -Peter -Original Message- From: Gunnar Hellström [mailto:gunnar.hellst...@ghaccess.se] Sent: Thursday, May 06, 2021 2:14 PM To: Peter Yee; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: a...@ietf.org; draft-ietf

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-avtcore-multi-party-rtt-mix-14

2021-05-05 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-yang-cbor-15

2021-03-20 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-unhandled-namespaces-07

2021-02-09 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-rack-14

2020-12-06 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-update-alg-id-protect-03

2020-08-25 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-email-smime-08

2020-07-09 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-session-id-04

2020-06-03 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-sdp-11

2020-04-29 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery-12

2020-02-16 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery-08

2020-02-01 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-certificate-compression-07

2019-12-09 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-thaler-iftype-reg-06

2019-11-09 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pim-reserved-bits-03

2019-09-04 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis-05

2019-08-04 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-egress-protection-framework-05

2019-06-20 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc6844bis-06

2019-05-15 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-algorithm-update-07

2019-04-06 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-smtp-require-tls-07

2019-02-08 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-wilde-service-link-rel-08

2018-12-20 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-wilde-service-link-rel-06

2018-11-20 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-campbell-sip-messaging-smime-03

2018-10-09 Thread Peter Yee
input. -Peter -Original Message- From: Ben Campbell [mailto:b...@nostrum.com] Sent: Tuesday, October 09, 2018 9:55 AM To: Peter Yee Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-campbell-sip-messaging-smime@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org Subject: Re: Genart last call review of draft-campbell

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-campbell-sip-messaging-smime-03

2018-10-08 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21

2018-06-13 Thread Peter Yee
f. Thanks, Acee On 6/13/18, 3:04 AM, "Peter Yee" wrote: Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-21

2018-06-13 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-14

2018-05-22 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-13

2018-05-10 Thread Peter Yee
=== is a virtual link With that change, please review the diff file attached and let us know if all your comments are incorporated in v14 (to be published after your approval). Thanks & Best regards, Young and Daniele From: Peter Yee [mailto:pe...@akayla.com] Sent: Thursda

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-13

2018-05-10 Thread Peter Yee
our comments. Let us know if you have any further comments. Thanks. Best regards, Young and Daniele > -Original Message- > From: Peter Yee [mailto:pe...@akayla.com] > Sent: mercoledì 2 maggio 2018 07:21 > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: draft-ietf-teas-actn-fram

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-framework-13

2018-05-01 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6lo-rfc6775-update-16

2018-04-03 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6lo-rfc6775-update-14

2018-03-07 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model-14

2018-02-23 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-11

2018-02-01 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-10

2018-02-01 Thread Peter Yee
g". That should have been Page 3. Typo on my part. I appreciate you addressing my comments (tardy as they were). -Peter -Original Message- From: Acee Lindem (acee) [mailto:a...@cisco.com] Sent: Wednesday, January 31, 2018 3:02 PM To: Peter Yee; gen-art@ietf.o

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-10

2018-01-31 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lwig-energy-efficient-08

2017-12-09 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-bier-mpls-encapsulation-10

2017-10-24 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-mrt-06

2017-09-01 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-rfc5444-usage-06

2017-06-30 Thread Peter Yee
- From: Dearlove, Christopher (UK) [mailto:chris.dearl...@baesystems.com] Sent: Friday, June 30, 2017 2:07 AM To: Peter Yee; gen-art@ietf.org Cc: ma...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-manet-rfc5444-usage@ietf.org Subject: RE: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-rfc5444-usage-06 Peter

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-rfc5444-usage-06

2017-06-30 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-multipath-12

2017-05-04 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-sipcore-status-unwanted-04

2017-03-21 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc2460bis-08

2017-02-28 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10

2017-01-17 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-3967upd-downref-00

2016-11-10 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-leiba-3967upd-downref-00 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: November 10, 2016 IETF LC End Date: November 15, 2016 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Best Current Practice, but has

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-lcaf-17

2016-10-12 Thread Peter Yee
, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-lisp-lcaf-17 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: October 12, 2016 IETF LC End Date: October 4, 2016 IESG Telechat date: October 13, 2016 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publi

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-lisp-lcaf-16

2016-10-12 Thread Peter Yee
strike the relevant sentence in the RTR RLOC definition (2nd to last sentence). Kind regards, -Peter -Original Message- From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:farina...@gmail.com] Sent: Wednesday, October 12, 2016 12:28 PM To: Peter Yee; suresh.krish...@ericsson.com Cc

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-lisp-lcaf-16

2016-10-10 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-lisp-lcaf-16 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: October 9, 2016 IETF LC End Date: October 4, 2016 IESG Telechat date: October 13, 2016 My apologies for the lateness in getting this review out. Nonetheless, I hope you wil

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-mpls-entropy-lsp-ping-04

2016-08-29 Thread Peter Yee
, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-entropy-lsp-ping-04 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: August 26, 2016 IETF LC End Date: August 26, 2016 IESG Telechat date: September 1, 2016 Summary: This draft is basically

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-entropy-lsp-ping-04

2016-08-27 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-entropy-lsp-ping-04 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: August 26, 2016 IETF LC End Date: August 26, 2016 IESG Telechat date: September 1, 2016 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Proposed Standard, b

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-10

2016-07-12 Thread Peter Yee
viewer: Peter Yee Review Date: July 5, 2016 IETF LC End Date: July 21, 2016 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. [Ready] -Peter -Original Message- From: Peter Yee [mailto:pe...@akayla.com] Sent: Tuesday, July 05, 201

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09

2016-07-05 Thread Peter Yee
Draft -10 has just been published and it addresses my concerns. So: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. [Ready] -Peter -Original Message- From: Peter Yee [mailto:pe...@akayla.com] Sent: Tuesday, July 05, 2016 1:07 PM To: draft-ietf

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09

2016-07-02 Thread Peter Yee
Donald, >> For cases of "[RFC5310] Based authentication" to "[RFC5310]-based >> authentication". Watch for one instance of "RFC 5310 Based" as well. >OK. >(Nit-Nit: I think in the nit above, the first word should be Four.) Ha! (I hadn't actually counted the number of cases. ) >> Page 12,

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09

2016-07-02 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-trill-channel-tunnel-09 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: July 1, 2016 IETF LC End Date: July 1, 2016 IESG Telechat date: July 7, 2016 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Proposed Standard, but has som

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-dmarc-interoperability-16

2016-06-09 Thread Peter Yee
, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-dmarc-interoperability-16 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: June 9, 2016 IETF LC End Date: June 3, 2016 IESG Telechat date: June 16, 2016 Summary: This draft is ready for publi

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dmarc-interoperability-15

2016-06-04 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-dmarc-interoperability-15 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: June 3, 2016 IETF LC End Date: June 3, 2016 IESG Telechat date: June 16, 2016 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but ha

[Gen-art] Assignments for the 2016-05-19 Telechat

2016-05-12 Thread Peter Yee
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft Brian Carpenter 2016-05-10 draft-ietf-teas-interconnected-te-info-exchange-06 * Dale Worley 2016-05-12 draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6020bis-12 ** Fernando Gont

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2016-05-12

2016-05-12 Thread Peter Yee
is included below. ***PLEASE LET ME KNOW ASAP IF YOU THINK I GOT ANYTHING WRONG WITH THE ASSIGNMENTS.*** The remainder of the assignment list (ignore the dates) looks like this: Meral Shirazipour 2016-04-29 Paul Kyzivat *2016-04-29 Pete Resnick *2016-04-26 Peter Yee * 2016-04-29 Ralph

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2016-05-05

2016-05-06 Thread Peter Yee
Resnick *2016-04-26 Peter Yee * 2016-04-29 Ralph Droms * 2016-05-04 (draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines looks like it is on the 05-19 telechat) Robert Sparks 2016-05-02 (draft-ietf-tsvwg-rtcweb-qos looks like it is on the 05-19 telechat) Ron Bonica * 2016-05-04 (draft-ietf

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-10

2016-05-03 Thread Peter Yee
, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-10 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: May 3, 2016 IETF LC End Date: April 29, 2016 IESG Telechat date: May 5, 2016 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publi

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-08

2016-05-02 Thread Peter Yee
Pushpasis, See my replies below prefaced with PEY>. Thanks. -Peter -Original Message- From: Pushpasis Sarkar [mailto:pushpasis.i...@gmail.com] Sent: Monday, May 02, 2016 10:35 AM To: Peter Yee; draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag@ietf.org Cc:

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-08

2016-04-30 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-08 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: April 27, 2016 IETF LC End Date: April 29, 2016 IESG Telechat date: May 5, 2016 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC, but ha

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-mgmnt-06

2016-04-06 Thread Peter Yee
;Hi Peter, > >Sorry for taking some time look at your comments. > >Thanks again for the time you spend on the draft, I think it has improved >a lot. > >I as well that the proposed change address your comments (see my answers >inline) > >ciao > > > >&

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-mgmnt-06

2016-03-11 Thread Peter Yee
Luigi, Please see my responses below prefixed with PEY>. Thanks. Kind regards, -Peter -Original Message- From: Luigi Iannone [mailto:g...@gigix.net] Sent: Wednesday, February 24, 2016 8:31 AM To: Peter Yee Cc: draft-ietf-lisp-eid-bl

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-08

2016-03-09 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-08 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: March 8, 2016 IETF LC End Date: March 8, 2016 IESG Telechat date: March 17, 2016 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC, but ha

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp-privacy-03

2016-02-05 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp-privacy-03 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: February 4, 2016 IETF LC End Date: February 4, 2016 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but has nits and a

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-mgmnt-06

2016-02-05 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-mgmnt-06 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: February 5, 2016 IETF LC End Date: February 5, 2016 IESG Telechat date: February 18, 2016 Summary: This draft has serious issues, described in the review, and

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies-09

2016-01-20 Thread Peter Yee
see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies-09 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Jan-20-2016 IETF LC End Date: Dec-14-2015 IESG Telechat date: Jan-21-2016 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies-08

2015-12-28 Thread Peter Yee
12:54 PM To: Peter Yee Cc: draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org Review Team; IETF Discussion Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-dnsop-cookies-08 Hi Peter, On Sun, Dec 27, 2015 at 8:30 PM, Peter Yee <pe...@akayla.com> wrote: > Hi Donald, > >

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-imapapnd-appendlimit-extension-07

2015-12-27 Thread Peter Yee
ttp://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-imapapnd-appendlimit-extension-07 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: December 27, 2015 IETF LC End Date: January 1, 2016 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a standards track RFC, b

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-pals-ms-pw-protection-03

2015-10-16 Thread Peter Yee
is well-known, the other not), CE (several possible expansions for this one), and G-Ach. Kind regards, -Peter From: Andrew G. Malis [mailto:agma...@gmail.com] Sent: Friday, October 16, 2015 1:55 AM To: Peter Yee Cc: draft-ietf

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-pals-ms-pw-protection-03

2015-10-15 Thread Peter Yee
see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-pals-ms-pw-protection-03 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Oct-15-2015 IETF LC End Date: Oct-15-2015 IESG Telechat date: Oct-22-2015 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Sta

[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-fast-lsps-requirements-01

2015-09-28 Thread Peter Yee
see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-teas-fast-lsps-requirements-01 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Sep-28-2015 IETF LC End Date: Sep-30-2015 IESG Telechat date: Sep-30-2015 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publi

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-04

2015-09-02 Thread Peter Yee
see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-04 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Sep-01-2015 IETF LC End Date: Jul-27-2015 IESG Telechat date: Sep-03-2015 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a BCP, b

[Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-08

2015-08-28 Thread Peter Yee
://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq Document: draft-ietf-mpls-tp-oam-id-mib-08 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Aug-27-2015 IETF LC End Date: Aug-27-2015 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. [Ready with nits

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