[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header-06

2024-09-12 Thread Robert Sparks
tpapi/deprecation-header/commit/a32eb7f65cddd8a4dc6ff1899814ae3756710e66 https://github.com/ietf-wg-httpapi/deprecation-header/blob/main/draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header.md On Thu, Sep 12, 2024 at 1:25 PM Robert Sparks wrote: Thanks - its going in the right direction I think. Please look

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header-06

2024-09-12 Thread Robert Sparks
l mark this issue resolved. We will publish the draft once we have addressed comments we may receive from other reviewers. regards, sanjay On Thu, Sep 12, 2024 at 9:34 AM Robert Sparks wrote: Thanks Sanjay - I think there's still some tension to resolve on who has age

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header-06

2024-09-12 Thread Robert Sparks
5 and we have addressed those. Draft 08 published today https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header/ incorporates all your comments per our understanding. Let me know if something is missed. regards, sanjay On Thu, Aug 29, 2024 at 10:21 AM Robert Sparks via

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header-06

2024-08-29 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-sendholdtimer-13

2024-07-15 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-benchmarking-stateful-06

2024-05-22 Thread Robert Sparks
Thanks for your very quick response Gábor. Everything below looks fine. Answers to your questions inline. On 5/22/24 12:25 PM, Gábor LENCSE wrote: Dear Robert, Thank you very much for your review and comments. Please see my answers inline. 2024.05.22. 18:30 keltezéssel, Robert Sparks via

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bmwg-benchmarking-stateful-06

2024-05-22 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tsvwg-udp-ipfix-08

2024-05-03 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-over-tls13-03

2023-10-26 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cbor-time-tag-11

2023-10-23 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-jmapaccess-04

2023-08-22 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [Sedate] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-08

2023-06-14 Thread Robert Sparks
On 6/14/23 3:22 AM, Carsten Bormann wrote: Hi Robert, Thank you for this review. Please see my comments on individual issues below. On 2023-06-13, at 23:59, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-08

2023-06-13 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01

2023-05-03 Thread Robert Sparks
On 5/3/23 1:12 PM, John Scudder wrote: On May 3, 2023, at 11:04 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote: 2) Please reconsider the link to the mailarchive in the RFC. Put it in the shepherd writeup or in the history in the datatracker as a comment (chairs can do this). Otherwise it adds to the list

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01

2023-04-27 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Robert Sparks
can be seen at: https://tinyurl.com/opsawg-add-latest. This may be tweaked a little bit for better readability. Cheers, Med -Message d'origine- De : last-call De la part de Robert Sparks Envoyé : mardi 21 février 2023 15:49 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; gen-art@ietf.org Cc :

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Robert Sparks
d-dnr-13 <https://www.iana.org/go/draft-ietf-add-dnr-13>] So both of these options are created by that particular draft which is becoming an RFC. See https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-add-dnr/13/ - Bernie On Feb 21, 2023, at 9:49 AM, Robert Sparks wrote:  On 2/20/23 12

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-21 Thread Robert Sparks
On 2/20/23 12:42 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: Hi Robert, Thank you for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med -Message d'origine- De : Robert Sparks via Datatracker Envoyé : vendredi 17 février 2023 21:30 À : gen-art@ietf.org Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypte

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09

2023-02-17 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-billon-expires-08

2022-12-16 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

2022-11-30 Thread Robert Sparks
On 11/30/22 5:53 PM, Brian Campbell wrote: On Wed, Nov 30, 2022 at 4:08 PM Robert Sparks wrote: On 11/30/22 2:39 PM, Brian Campbell wrote: Thank you for the review Robert. And apologies for the very delayed response. I think we had a bit of a volunteer's dilemma &

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

2022-11-30 Thread Robert Sparks
nd should be in the -17 revision. Some discussion on the majors is inline below. On Thu, Nov 17, 2022 at 3:45 PM Robert Sparks wrote: I have two major issues that I think need discussion: Major Issue 1) The document seems to be specifying a new way of comparing json names, cla

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

2022-11-17 Thread Robert Sparks
On 11/17/22 4:44 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: Apologies - an upload fumble left -00 empty. I've revised it to have content at -01. Which I'll also paste here for convenience: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

2022-11-17 Thread Robert Sparks
Apologies - an upload fumble left -00 empty. I've revised it to have content at -01. RjS On 11/17/22 4:36 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Ge

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

2022-11-17 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-5g-nftypes-05

2022-10-14 Thread Robert Sparks
trimming: On 10/14/22 2:57 PM, Russ Housley wrote: Robert: Thanks for the prompt review. Happy to be able to get it out quickly. Genart is crunched. Minor Issue: The document says operators need to not use colliding names but then explicitly declaires on how an operator would know if a nam

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-5g-nftypes-05

2022-10-13 Thread Robert Sparks
minor tweak On 10/13/22 4:44 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: At: "The mechanism for an operator to determine whether an ASCII string associate with a NF Type is unique across operators is outside the scope of this document" I suggest "string associate with" ->

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-5g-nftypes-05

2022-10-13 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-version-negotiation-10

2022-10-08 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-ipv6-deployment-07

2022-09-24 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-add-ddr-08

2022-07-08 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-01

2022-05-03 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Proposed change to review assignment email subject

2022-03-29 Thread Robert Sparks
Please take note of https://github.com/ietf-tools/datatracker/discussions/3760. If the change proposed there will cause problems for you, add a comment there, or reply to tools-disc...@ietf.org to let us know. RjS ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ie

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-faltstrom-base45-10

2022-02-23 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-19

2022-01-21 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-10

2021-11-11 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cbor-network-addresses-08

2021-09-19 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] BIER-TE looping example (was: Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-10)

2021-08-13 Thread Robert Sparks
Sat, Aug 07, 2021 at 03:42:02PM -0700, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: If you have the following configuration (best read in a fixed-width font): BFRA: p1 -> forward_connected(DNC) BFRC p2 -> forward_connected(DNC) BFRD p3 -> local_decap BFRB: p1 -> forward_connect

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bier-te-arch-10

2021-08-07 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart Last Call review: draft-ietf-6man-grand

2021-06-17 Thread Robert Sparks
Dan - I put the assignment back into accepted manually. Sent from my iPhone > On Jun 17, 2021, at 3:44 AM, Dan Romascanu wrote: > >  > Hi, > > Due to a system glitch I cannot enter my reviews via the tool. Until this is > fixed, here are my early comments to draft-ietf-6man-grand, which w

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] [stir] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-stir-enhance-rfc8226-02

2021-06-11 Thread Robert Sparks
I think Pierce's question was whether _this_ document, once published as an RFC, obsoletes (and replaces) 8226. It does not. It only updates 8226, as noted on the first page, and in the metadata captured in the datatracker. There is not an 8226bis effort underway at this time. I've set the Re

[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-masque-ip-proxy-reqs-02

2021-06-04 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: On the Right Track This is an early genart review of draft-ietf-masque-ip-proxy-reqs-02. Comments here should be processed the same as any other feedback given for the document. I think I see some conflicts in the requirements that I think would be good to

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-ipv6-ehs-packet-drops-05

2021-02-19 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-imap4rev2-24

2021-01-14 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipv6-ipv4-codes-05

2020-11-14 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-lorawan-10

2020-10-12 Thread Robert Sparks
eview them before we publish an new ID ? Thank you Olivier *From:*Olivier Gimenez *Sent:* 05 October 2020 11:54 *To:* 'Robert Sparks' ; gen-art@ietf.org *Cc:* lp-...@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-lorawan@ietf.org *Subject:* RE: Genart last call review

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-over-lorawan-10

2020-10-02 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-na-flags-05

2020-08-31 Thread Robert Sparks
next revision. Thank you! Jorge *From: *Robert Sparks via Datatracker *Date: *Tuesday, August 18, 2020 at 6:11 PM *To: *gen-art@ietf.org *Cc: *draft-ietf-bess-evpn-na-flags@ietf.org , last-c...@ietf.org , b...@ietf.org *Subject: *Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-na-flags-05

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-na-flags-05

2020-08-18 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11

2020-06-22 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-lsp-scheduling-13

2020-06-12 Thread Robert Sparks
On 6/11/20 9:12 AM, Robert Sparks wrote: Thanks! Some initial replies inline (I haven't looked at the updated draft yet, but will do so soon): I've looked at the diffs between -13 and -15 and my comments have been addressed except for one point.    Only one of them (i.e

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-lsp-scheduling-13

2020-06-11 Thread Robert Sparks
Your comments have been addressed in the updated document https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-lsp-scheduling/ Best Regards, Huaimo *From:* Robert Sparks via Datatracker *Sent:* Tuesday, June 9, 2020 5:41 P

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-lsp-scheduling-13

2020-06-09 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] [Id-event] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-09

2020-06-04 Thread Robert Sparks
ong". -- Mike -Original Message- From: Id-event On Behalf Of Robert Sparks via Datatracker Sent: Friday, May 8, 2020 11:57 AM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: last-c...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll@ietf.org; id-ev...@ietf.org Subject: [Id

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-09

2020-05-08 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01

2020-03-17 Thread Robert Sparks
I like that and hope it's acceptable to the community. But it was a very small nit - if it turns out to be problematic, I'm ok leaving things as they were. RjS On 3/17/20 10:26 PM, Randy Bush wrote: I wanted to avoid "be able to be" and have an explicit actor. I see the difficulty you point

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01

2020-03-17 Thread Robert Sparks
On 3/17/20 8:34 PM, Randy Bush wrote: thanks for review robert, This sentence slowed me down when reading: As the origin AS may be modified by outbound policy, policy semantics based on RPKI Origin Validation state MUST be able to be applied separately on distribution into BGP an

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01

2020-03-13 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-calext-jscalendar-25

2020-03-03 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: CALL to revoke last call: Re: [tsvwg] Request for working group feedback on draft-kuehlewind-system-ports (6th March, 2020)

2020-02-18 Thread Robert Sparks
Hi Joe - Thanks for the heads up. I haven't been following this and am just starting to read the threads on tsvwg, so apologies if my question below has already been addressed. On 2/17/20 5:09 PM, Joe Touch wrote: FYI to the ARTs involved. Discussion appears to at least be started in TSVW

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04

2020-02-07 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits This is a combined genart and secdir last-call review. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2020-02-07 IETF LC End Date: 2020-02-12 IESG

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-cellar-ebml-14

2019-12-06 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02

2019-11-26 Thread Robert Sparks
Hi Martin - Sent from my iPhone > On Nov 26, 2019, at 5:16 PM, Martin Thomson wrote: > > Thanks for the review Robert, > >> On Wed, Nov 27, 2019, at 09:47, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: >> Neither the document nor the shepherds write-up acknowledge or expla

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02

2019-11-26 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cellar-ebml-13

2019-11-04 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] [Rift] Genart early review of draft-ietf-rift-rift-08

2019-10-28 Thread Robert Sparks
on, Oct 28, 2019 at 12:00 PM Robert Sparks via Datatracker mailto:nore...@ietf.org>> wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Not Ready Summary: Not ready for publication as a Proposed Standard I found this document very difficult to read. On my first past through,

[Gen-art] Genart early review of draft-ietf-rift-rift-08

2019-10-28 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Not Ready Summary: Not ready for publication as a Proposed Standard I found this document very difficult to read. On my first past through, I was fairly certain it didn't specify the protocol well enough to actually implement it, until I got deep int

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-senml-etch-05

2019-08-29 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-mix-with-psk-06

2019-08-16 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnssd-push-23

2019-08-02 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-mix-with-psk-05

2019-07-30 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mile-jsoniodef-09

2019-07-16 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-push-20

2019-07-03 Thread Robert Sparks
On 7/2/19 4:24 PM, Tom Pusateri wrote: On Jun 28, 2019, at 4:03 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: Issue: The discussion of recursive resolvers in section 6.1 may need additional consideration. In particular, the recommendation to pass a received error code along to a client has, I

Re: [Gen-art] [dnssd] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-push-20

2019-07-02 Thread Robert Sparks
inline On 7/2/19 1:36 PM, Tom Pusateri wrote: On Jun 28, 2019, at 4:03 PM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnssd-push-20

2019-06-28 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-ip-06

2019-06-03 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13

2019-04-10 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

Re: [Gen-art] Review Assignments

2019-03-28 Thread Robert Sparks
ll 2019-04-01 draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07 Robert Sparks Last Call 2019-04-12 draft-ietf-netconf-restconf-notif-13 * Other revision previously reviewed ** This revision already reviewed Next in the reviewer rotation: Jari Arkko Stewart Bryant Brian Carpenter El

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd-07

2019-03-14 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] IEEE 754 reference (was Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cellar-ebml-09)

2019-02-20 Thread Robert Sparks
Also, the reference to IEEE 754 should probably point to the 2008 version instead of the 1985 version (unless you've got a specific reason to use the older one?) RjS On 2/20/19 2:02 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART rev

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cellar-ebml-09

2019-02-20 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-sr-over-ip-02

2019-02-20 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dots-requirements-18

2019-02-13 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ntp-bcp-10

2018-12-13 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-arkko-trip-registry-update-01

2018-12-10 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-requirements-16

2018-11-14 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-clue-signaling-14

2018-11-01 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-clue-signaling-13

2018-10-12 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-replace-01

2018-10-12 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-bcp-07

2018-10-03 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-iasa2-trust-update-00

2018-09-20 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-taps-minset-08

2018-09-06 Thread Robert Sparks
Aaron - To be a bit more clear, my point is to twist the IESGs arm about recent pushback on WGs publishing requirements documents... RjS On 9/6/18 3:22 PM, Aaron Falk wrote: On 6 Sep 2018, at 16:07, Robert Sparks wrote: (Repeating one thing from my Last Call review for the benefit of

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-taps-minset-08

2018-09-06 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] [Taps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-minset-06

2018-09-04 Thread Robert Sparks
ul review!  We just posted a revision ( -07 ) that, we believe, addresses these comments. A few answers in line below: > On 28 Aug 2018, at 23:38, Robert Sparks mailto:rjspa...@nostrum.com>> wrote: > > Reviewer: Robert Sparks

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-minset-06

2018-08-28 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-08-01 Thread Robert Sparks
Answering your question inline: On 8/1/18 6:55 PM, William Denniss wrote: Robert, Thank you for your valuable feedback. Version 12 incorporates your feedback. Replies inline: On Mon, Jun 11, 2018 at 9:20 AM, Robert Sparks <mailto:rjspa...@nostrum.com>> wrote: Reviewer: Robe

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-11

2018-07-31 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-07-20 Thread Robert Sparks
As far as I can tell, there has been no response to this. The document revision just updated a reference to reflect an rfc having been published. Apologies if I missed a response. RjS On 6/11/18 12:20 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-06-11 Thread Robert Sparks
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-00

2018-06-04 Thread Robert Sparks
iff?url2=draft-hakala-urn-nbn-rfc3188bis-01.txt Thanks! Peter On 5/1/18 12:35 PM, Robert Sparks wrote: Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed

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